kewp80 Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 Yeah, so after making my Keystone Hilltoppers logo, I guess I've decided to work on some of the other teams in the league.So here's last year's champion the Roswell UFOs. Had this idea pop into my head the other day, with the green dome being a baseball. This actually turned out better than I thought it would, still not amazing though.Anyway, C&C if you wish to. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyHubCaps Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 First post!Anyway, it looks nice. I like the colors and whatnot. Are you doing hat logos too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 First post!No, do NOT start this . We don't need every 14 year old on this board saying "OMG FIRST!!!11" at the start of every topic. We already have the stupid IBTL, which needs to stop. If I see this crap again, I am blaming you.As for the logo, it seems very horizontal to fit on a cap. I don't know how you were going to go about that, but it's something to think about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 I think the logo looks good. I'm not sure if the "flatness" of it is a bad thing or not. I'd suggest about giving it some sort of motion or action, but that might require a complete redesign of the ship. Besides, I'm not sure if it's necessary. It wouldn't work as a hat logo, but you can simply use an "R" or the stereotypical alien head (which would be a good alternate).The wordmark is fine. You played it safe with the font and I don't have a suggestion that would be better. My issue with it is the "S" in "UFOS." When it's the same size, it looks like it's supposed to be a word rather than an acronym. The immediate solution that I thought about was make the "S" lowercase so it says "UFOs." A second solution would be to insert an apostrophe resulting in "UFO'S." The apostrophe solution isn't quite apporpriate since you're not abbreviating somthing, but I feel some sort of distinction between "UFO" and the pluralizing "S" is needed.Solid start. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamikel Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 I'm not usually a big fan of baseball logos using baseball stitching on round objects, as if it's needed to remind the players of what sport they play. But in this case, it's so subtle that I can't help but like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyHubCaps Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 First post!No, do NOT start this . We don't need every 14 year old on this board saying "OMG FIRST!!!11" at the start of every topic. We already have the stupid IBTL, which needs to stop. If I see this crap again, I am blaming you.It's the first time I've ever done that, and I only did it because I happened to be on at the very moment he posted it, which never happens mid-day. Not for me, anyway. The second it took me to refresh the page, and a new thread appeared. I dunno, it was kind of cool.And I apologize that the Internet has sullened you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 i like it. it'd be better if the name was "Roswell Invasion" but youre not in control of that.good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 Yeah, so after making my Keystone Hilltoppers logo, I guess I've decided to work on some of the other teams in the league.So here's last year's champion the Roswell UFOs. Had this idea pop into my head the other day, with the green dome being a baseball. This actually turned out better than I thought it would, still not amazing though.Anyway, C&C if you wish to.I LOVE this! GREAT job! I think putting the UFO on a hat with no text underneath would look GREAT! I would definitely buy one!As for the "UFOS" text, the only thing that looks weird to me is that the "S" is the same size as "UFO". I understand why it's like that, but I think it makes more send for the "S" to be a little smaller than the other letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted February 16, 2008 Author Share Posted February 16, 2008 Yeah, now that I look at it I'm not liking the flatness of it either. I'll go back and fool around with it a little, and mess with the UFOs text. Thanks for the C&C guys. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 I would change UFOS to UFOs (make the s lowercase). On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleujayone Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 I like where you're going with this one. I'd make the baseball more dominate in the logo. I'd make the "dome" part of the spaceship stick out a little further up, and I would also have a portion of the ball stick out of the bottom of the ship too. I would also have a green star burst behind the ship. I'm thinking of the star burst logo on the Denver Gold of the old USFL (we have it on file here). I'd have the star burst outline in a midnight blue rather than black. Just thoughts on how to make the logo stand out for you. We all have our little faults. Mine's in California. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted February 18, 2008 Author Share Posted February 18, 2008 First update for this logo:C&C Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted February 18, 2008 Share Posted February 18, 2008 Wow! Huge improvement kewp. Only flaw I see is I'm not sure about the baseball going through both sides of the saucer. Maybe just make the top part of the baseball showing, and maybe make it a little bigger so it's clear it's a baseball. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazberg Posted February 18, 2008 Share Posted February 18, 2008 You should watch BASEketball, there was a team in the movie called the Roswell Aliens, might give you some ideas. I thought that may have been your inspiration at first. charles-noerenberg.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyHubCaps Posted February 18, 2008 Share Posted February 18, 2008 I'd still like to see a hat logo, but this is definitely an upgrade... and I liked the first one, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted February 19, 2008 Share Posted February 19, 2008 First update for this logo:C&Csimply awsome.well done sir. :notworthy: Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted February 19, 2008 Share Posted February 19, 2008 Winner!Spectacular improvement. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleujayone Posted February 19, 2008 Share Posted February 19, 2008 we have a winnah! We all have our little faults. Mine's in California. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 20, 2008 Share Posted February 20, 2008 I liked the first one, but the 2nd is even better. GREAT upgrade to the logo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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