CreamSoda Posted February 2, 2009 Share Posted February 2, 2009 Hey!I was just looking to get some feedback on this logo I am working on. Any C&C welcome. Thanksand this one (I know its blue): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swe3t Posted February 2, 2009 Share Posted February 2, 2009 pretty solid logo.. i like it and the font on the second one is fitting and cool.. One thing I might recommend is maybe do like vertical lines for pupils? that might look cool.. and also if you wanted a third color you could keep the outline from the top logo, and add a stroke to the font.. but its up to you.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONUV Posted February 2, 2009 Share Posted February 2, 2009 i think the right ear should be a little more vertical. the eyes need pupils too and maybe add a tongue. i think the 2nd one could use an outline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 this logo has REAL potential, in my mind...i'd like to see you tweak the eyes a bit and smooth the transition from the jaw to the lower mouth area...maybe thicken that as well as the left side of the face which is in the light a bit - the wordmark effect is interesting and appropriate, but i'm not a huge fan of the font chosen - great start...now finish it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StPatty33 Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 I agree w/ONUV about the ear, except that rather than the right being more vertical I think the left should be down a bit. Cats put their ears back when they attack, and the right ear looks like it's in that position--the left just needs adjusting.Add 2 striking pupils and I think you've got something HOT! The below to be updated once the newest banner is raised! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Very Carolina Panthers.....   5-time Defending NL East Champions  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Very Carolina Panthers.....Because it's a panther?...It's not even close to Carolina's logo!I think the first one is the more solid of the two, but it just needs some tweaks that other people have already suggested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 Thanks guys!I will tweak the ears and eyes today and see what I can come up with! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Hornet Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 The first one pops for me in a way that the 2nd one doesn't (it might just be the color) but they're both nice. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Very Carolina Panthers.....YEAH RIGHT!No relation whatsoever. trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 Here it is with those changes. Let me know if those changes worked... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StPatty33 Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 The ear looks much better, and the eyes do too. Solid logo--though I can't help but feeling you're missing an opportunity with the eyes of this to really create some intensity in the logo.Very solid stuff though. The below to be updated once the newest banner is raised! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 Very Carolina Panthers.....Because it's a panther?...It's not even close to Carolina's logo!I disagree...he has a valid point. I don't think he was trying to say that it was a tweak of the Carolina Panther logo...just that it reminded him of it. Flip his panther logo, and place it over the face of the Carolina logo- I can see the similarity while appreciating his own unique attempt as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONUV Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 maybe use yellow eyes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 How about this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bieb Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 I like that one!! great job on the eyes.What was the cougar font that you had used? or was it a custom creation?HaroldHow about this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 and this one:The font is Berlin Sans with some customizations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONUV Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 i meant the pupils but that looks good too, especially the purple one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swe3t Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 and this one:The font is Berlin Sans with some customizations.thats effin awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted February 6, 2009 Share Posted February 6, 2009 Really like the newest version... when I opened the thread my first reaction to your first try was the "eyes" needed something then without even reading I scrolled through to see the progression... pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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