Shmee Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 I for one love the new Coyotes jerseys and logo, but I thought that since both the home and away jersey are so classic that it might be cool to have a more modern, free-flowing third jersey. I also used their wordmark as the crest logo, because as much as I love the coyote head I wanted to try something different. Clicking the link should work fine. If not, Copy and Paste.Coyotes Alternate ConceptPlease leave any thoughts you have, good or bad. This is only the second jersey I've ever designed and I look to you guys to help me get better. The world's foremost practitioners of professional tag-team wrestling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 Very decent try for only ur second concept, just one thing. IMO, that jersey style only works for the SJ Sharks. I do like the jersey tho, it just doesn't fit however. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 well its a whole lot better than my first http://www.freewebs.com/yyyrr/JHH.JPGand I have got alot better since then, well somewhat better since then, atleast a little better and you will too...i don't really like it though sorryand i see green is there green in there im not really sure i have bad eyes if there is green it should be taken outbut for your 2nd really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shmee Posted March 28, 2004 Author Share Posted March 28, 2004 and i see green is there green in there im not really sure i have bad eyes if there is green it should be taken outGood spot there Stimpy. I'm using the Phoenix home letters from Roger Clemente's package, which are in the team's old colors. I forgot to change the outline on the letters from deep green to black, but I went back and the problem is now fixed. Thanks for the heads up and the words of encouragement. The world's foremost practitioners of professional tag-team wrestling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 yeah seeing my 1st jersey is some encouragement... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 on the back: the meshing shouldn't be like it is on the front. On a Sharks jersey for this template, only the armpit triangles would have the meshing on the back, the rest is just plain material. On this, if your name were longer than about 7 letters, it would run into red meshing, which would look odd. Finally, the hem stripe and the sleeve cuffs are out of place and have no bearing to match anything in the rest of the design.For a second design, it's not bad. Granted it is the Sharks template, but it is very clean and you didn't color in the elbows wierdly. Keep working, your stuff will improve each time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted March 28, 2004 Share Posted March 28, 2004 For a second design, it's not bad. Granted it is the Sharks template, but it is very clean and you didn't color in the elbows wierdly. Keep working, your stuff will improve each time. Amen to that!One minor suggestion... the shoulder logos would be upside down to the people watching on TV... generally the top of the logo is closest to the collar.Good work for your second go-round! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 stimpy... is that FUR on the Bruins' sleeves???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sacker12 Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 It looks okay, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazberg Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 Basically I'm echoing what others have said, not bad for a second try, but I don't really think this fits the Coyotes, it's got too much of their old-jersey feel. And i think the sleeve cuff stripes are totally outta place. But keep on truckin' man. charles-noerenberg.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazberg Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 And Stimpy, your first concept......good God man...... :vomit: charles-noerenberg.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 is it fur well i'm not sure...(that rhymes) i don't know what i was thinking and you said "good god man" for a second i though u liked it... also i got my own coyotes one and its pretty old to so be kind it may be off or sohttp://www.freewebs.com/asssszsff/coyotes.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted March 29, 2004 Share Posted March 29, 2004 Shmee2k6Extremely nice uniform. I am not fond of the "PHX" word mark as the front logo - however the concept is clean. I like your work. The word mark is plain - but distinctive - not many NHL teams use their word mark on their unis' Keep up the Good work Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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