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Well, after being a guest on this board for like, 2 years, I've decided to finally join the place... Why did I take so long? I just wanted to see the full quality of work here, and I gotta say, THIS PLACE IS THE TRUTH!!!

And also, I decided to try and get an illustrator program before I joined up... Now that I got one, I've decided to join...

So my first post is a concept I made for the Houston Astros..

Houston Astros Concept

Sorry if it's a bit rough, but anyways, comments, good bad, or just plain ugly are welcome

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A little softball-ish. Even little league. That being said, i do actually like it.

For a first post, that ain't too shabby. Keep up the good work.

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I decided to try and get an illustrator program before I joined up... Now that I got one, I've decided to join...

First off, Welcome!

Sencondly... illustrator program, or Adobe Illustrator?

Third... the concept... a little grainy (might be the program you're using or the way you're saving your work), but the idea behind it isn't bad.

Good work for a first-timer!

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I decided to try and get an illustrator program before I joined up... Now that I got one, I've decided to join...

First off, Welcome!

Sencondly... illustrator program, or Adobe Illustrator?

Third... the concept... a little grainy (might be the program you're using or the way you're saving your work), but the idea behind it isn't bad.

Good work for a first-timer!

While I know some people don't post when their comments have already been said, I think that is wrong, and lazy.

So, here are MY comments about your post...

First off, Welcome!

Secondly... illustrator program, or Adobe Illustrator?

Third... the concept... a little grainy (might be the program you're using or the way you're saving your work), but the idea behind it isn't bad.

Good work for a first-timer!

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good start, this is possibly the first Astros concept with the current scheme that i like (and i despise the real ones with a passion, my preference is for their blue and gold scheme, which they stupidly scrapped)

the style reminds me of the 78 padres, except it doens't make you look like you work at mcdonalds, circa 1978. the hats, the first one is reminiscent of the old blue jays, and the second one reminds me of its negative.

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TFOA (the flame of atlanta)-

Welcome to the CC boards. We hope you will post more of your work - don't take anything personal. We have a fine group of sports, graphic & logo fans. They will speak what they think and make suggestions. Only to help you along the way. I too have taken many of their suggestions and it has helped.

Glad to have you post your work - I like your dark unis the best. The white one are a bit "softball stylish". Might shrink the 'Texas' outline logo a bit and then post a large one to show the detail. Really nice job for the first post.

Keep them coming!! :D

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Hey, thanks to everybody for the greetings, I feel really welcome! And as for the concepts, I'm going to keep em coming... As soon as I get some ideas, because I've got a severe mental block right now :P

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Welcome fellow ATLien...

I actually like the concept a lot. I love the hat with the white panel on it, which is odd, because I usually hate that style of "throwback" hat... but for some reason it really seems to work in this concept.

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