9erssteve Posted September 14, 2010 Share Posted September 14, 2010 Hey Davidson any chance if you've got a spare few minutes you could maybe pull your top five or six from this thread and critique them? You know point out the good and bad so folks can really understand what makes them work and so the creators of the ones you choose could tighten their ideas further.9erssteve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 Here's one I made for the UNT Mean Green:It was mostly done on my iPad and touched up with Photoshop.Edit: Head color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 Hey Davidson any chance if you've got a spare few minutes you could maybe pull your top five or six from this thread and critique them? You know point out the good and bad so folks can really understand what makes them work and so the creators of the ones you choose could tighten their ideas further.9ersstevegood idea, ill do just that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pwood Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 I totally forgot to post my follow up. My bad. But here is as far as I've gotten. C&C very welcome. Seriously, get very picky if you have to lol.I will mention that the one thing I seem to struggle with is applying the color. Ideally, I'd like it to be in Flyers colors. However, the black, orange, and white just isn't doing it for me or the design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted September 20, 2010 Share Posted September 20, 2010 looks great. I would suggest making the entire logo orange and then adding the white parts as highlights if you are stuck with coloring. That's just me though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted September 20, 2010 Share Posted September 20, 2010 Here's the recent update to my UNT Logo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blase Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 not bad man.reckon you could keep your stroke width a wee bit more constistent, but looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blase Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 Thanks Fraser.It's my first attempt and there are a few areas that don't sit right with me but I'm not sure what it neeeds. Which areas were you referring to in regards to the stroke size? The face? Any feedback is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 Thanks Fraser.It's my first attempt and there are a few areas that don't sit right with me but I'm not sure what it neeeds. Which areas were you referring to in regards to the stroke size? The face? Any feedback is appreciated.i reckon you can afford to block out much thicker areas in the areas you have detail (chin, jersey collar, shoulder etc. at present, it feels like you are mimicking the lines you would make were you to sketch the guy. to achieve a more logo like feel, you need much thicker consistent (similar width) lines.here is one i prepared earlier:having said that, there is no doubt you captured the guys face well. its a great start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blase Posted September 29, 2010 Share Posted September 29, 2010 Cheers for that. I'll keep tinkering with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amadocjr Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 this is my first post I will keep working on it.I'm using Ink scape Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torsten Posted October 13, 2010 Share Posted October 13, 2010 Hello there,my name is Torsten. I'm new here and wanted to show you my result that was made by following instructions of Fraser Davidson's tutorial. That was the reason why I landed on this forum. I always have been looking on sportslogos.net for those incredible sports team logos of the U.S.A. Living in Bavaria/Germany I'm desperate with the logos we have in our country. Some are horrible. I created a logo for a local speedway team, that are called the Devils. It was my first project and everyone was the delighted.Now to come to my post. I was focusing on with which animal picture I could work. I decided to take a Hippo. I think there are not much Hippo logos to see. The tutorial was very helpful, so thank you Fraser for that great stuff.I'm not finished yet. Also need a "team name" and was thinking of like "Sea Beasts".Cheers,torsten http://s1217.photobucket.com/albums/dd388/st-le/Hockey%20Concepts/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted October 13, 2010 Share Posted October 13, 2010 Hello there,my name is Torsten. I'm new here and wanted to show you my result that was made by following instructions of Fraser Davidson's tutorial. That was the reason why I landed on this forum. I always have been looking on sportslogos.net for those incredible sports team logos of the U.S.A. Living in Bavaria/Germany I'm desperate with the logos we have in our country. Some are horrible. I created a logo for a local speedway team, that are called the Devils. It was my first project and everyone was the delighted.Now to come to my post. I was focusing on with which animal picture I could work. I decided to take a Hippo. I think there are not much Hippo logos to see. The tutorial was very helpful, so thank you Fraser for that great stuff.I'm not finished yet. Also need a "team name" and was thinking of like "Sea Beasts".Cheers,torstencool, but where is the image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torsten Posted October 13, 2010 Share Posted October 13, 2010 Just inserted it above. http://s1217.photobucket.com/albums/dd388/st-le/Hockey%20Concepts/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torsten Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 For me it looks great for a first try. But I'd like to know what the experts think about. Any comments please? http://s1217.photobucket.com/albums/dd388/st-le/Hockey%20Concepts/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drknox5 Posted October 14, 2010 Share Posted October 14, 2010 Here's one i made of nelson cruz. It's my first try, so i'll probably use more shading when i do another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torsten Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 I had some time this weekend to make a new fantasy logo. What do you think about it? I also appreciate any comment. http://s1217.photobucket.com/albums/dd388/st-le/Hockey%20Concepts/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torsten Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 The update of the unnamed hippo. Any comment is appreciated.Thanks http://s1217.photobucket.com/albums/dd388/st-le/Hockey%20Concepts/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 I like the giants logo. I would try to simplify some of the features around the face and make some lines a bit thicker. I would change the eyes too because they look too cartoony. Maybe make them more menacing somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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