The Fixer Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 I started a concept today for the contest at Puckdrawn and surprisingly finished. The wordmark is just a font, and is more of a title then a well thought out mark. and the 2nd wing is just the primary (again) but smaller so you can see the tips of the wing. So here it is: edit: the wing primary logo was also made to be a "D" and i couldnt figure out how to get the small "yellow-ish" stripes on the socks off. i couldnt select them for some reason. So imagine they are not there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gladsadmad Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 Cool!...i like the logo alot..and the grey is a nice subtle 3rd color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 Looks like it would be a better fit for the Ducks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDG1906 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 Hi im a new member from Guadalajara Mexico, at first escuse if my english is not good, Im a sports fan and a amateur designer (very amateur xD)i will post some ideas or concepts laterabout th topic; i think the D logo looks a little weird,it looks like an harp without strings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 This logo is way too complicated for my taste. I don't see much improvement over what they currently have. That's not to say you're designs are bad, it's just too busy. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 The feathers on the wing don't really look wing-like. They just look like the same feather layered on top of itself. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 The wing logo is too bulky. Although I do like the way you tried to incorporate the D into the logo but, the D logo looks a bit too much like a B. I really like the gray alt. though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 The wing logo is too bulky. Although I do like the way you tried to incorporate the D into the logo but, the D logo looks a bit too much like a B. I really like the gray alt. though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 sorry, internet froze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 The wing logo is too bulky. Although I do like the way you tried to incorporate the D into the logo but, the D logo looks a bit too much like a B. I really like the gray alt. though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 The logo looks too much like a harp. It doesn't really suit my taste. The jerseys are really fine though. The only thing I would add is a grey stripe above the white area on the socks, so it can match the rest of the uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted March 11, 2010 Author Share Posted March 11, 2010 Thanks everyone. I was originally going for an angel wing hence the harp shape but oh well. I'm going to go back and change th lgos a big. Make them sleeker.And does Anyone know how to change the title of a topic? I would like to make this an original six rebranding series because I have a few others laid out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VC// Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 That logo is wayyy too busy. People seem to forget, it's Detroit - Motor City. It has to represent that, cars, etc...that's the culture the logo was based on. People trying to make it more "wing" like usually fail. I don't really see this logo representing the city at all. LETS GO PENGUINS! 5x Stanley Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted March 12, 2010 Author Share Posted March 12, 2010 ok i came up with a new logo. easier to see the d shape and less bulky. I have 3 versions to show though. Also im thinking of just renaming them the wings. (remember its for a contest, not a real serious proposal. I also came up with a new secondary that forms another simpler D.so tell me which you like best:1.2.3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 What is the alternate logo of? Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted March 12, 2010 Author Share Posted March 12, 2010 a D........ just a creative way to do a Dso: I know many of you think its too hard to see each wing. I thought i fixed it but i guess i forgot to use that version in those above so here is a quick comparison. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDG1906 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 the new first lgo looks much better than the harp but the sec. doesn't really works, the silver line is unnecesary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted March 12, 2010 Author Share Posted March 12, 2010 yea its supposed to be the middle of the d but wasnt sure if it would work. Oh well, gotta figure something out for that though.and Im redoing the Original Six. how does my maple leafs rough draft look?and i know that the bottom trees are pine trees not maple trees but it works for toronto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted March 12, 2010 Author Share Posted March 12, 2010 ok im absolutely unhappy with the new update, so im going to sketch more ideas and get back to work tomorrow. in the meantime here is a rangers rough draft Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 You need to slow down and put more thought into these. Both concept and execution are lacking on all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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