Phoenix Coyotes Jersey Concept

[logo-maker]

Update 2

Changes:

-made the coyote bigger in primary crest

-made stripes consistant

-made breezers black

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C&C much appreciated

[phlash]

Yes. Resized coyote is much better. I think the SJ numbers look a little unnatural, I don't think they match the smooth roundness of the crest, it is especially apparent to me on the shoulder numbers.

[aci]

The new crest is great, beats every logo they actually use by a mile.

You may want to swap the outlines on the shoulder yokes, with the black on the outside and the sand on the inside. I think it'd match the rest of the striping better.

[GO2HELL]

what aci said but keep the breezers brick red, black seems kinda out of place IMO.

[GMW79]

I too agree with aci, but I think the black pants look fine.

[ThePonderer]

I honestly feel the pants should be the primary red. The black throws the rest of the uniform off to me.

[crashcarson15]

Flip the shoulder piping so it matches the sleeve stripes and this looks a lot better.

[The Droid]

This is one I made

[Brass]

This is one I made

Not really polite to post your concept in another user's thread.

[Eye]

This is one I made

Not really polite to post your concept in another user's thread.

Thanks for letting us all know, newest, mod team member.

[the admiral]

I think it should be perfectly acceptable to post your own concepts in a thread. It's kinda better that way than to have multiple threads for a flavor of a month, and maybe people can build off one another. Piggybacking is an important part of the creative process.

[Brass]

Thanks for letting us all know, newest, mod team member.

Oh, look! It's this guy again. You've made it more than obvious that you don't like me or my posts. Why not just read over them? I'm not forcing you to read them, guv'na.

I think it should be perfectly acceptable to post your own concepts in a thread. It's kinda better that way than to have multiple threads for a flavor of a month, and maybe people can build off one another. Piggybacking is an important part of the creative process.

I have to disagree with that. I think it's easier to have individual threads, so that individual critiques can be given to the jersey, without having to quote an individual set and taking up half the board with that. Now, if there was some sort of "Concept Archive", then yes, I'd be in favor of categorizing them. However, for individual concepts, I'm just used to individual threads. Oh, well. To each his own.

[logo-maker]

I'm sorry I haven't posted my latest update for this concept (have had to work and meet scholastic deadlines). I should have something posted later this week including an alternate jersey.

Oh and The Droid, I believe it take ten post within this forum before you can make your own thread (this should be easy for you to do). Then you can post your concepts in your own thread and get individualized critiques on your own concepts.

I hope this helps.