AndrewPF Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 In my 4 or 5 years on these boards, I'd never seen someone do a hockey series using gas stations.I decided to change that, so here is Shell, the first of the series.As of now, there are just jerseys, because this template does not include helmets, socks, or pants. Home:Away:Alternate: http://i.imgur.com/4ahMZxD.png koizim said: And...and ya know what we gotta do? We gotta go kick him in da penis. He'll be injured. Injured bad. COYS and Go Sox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 A lot better! I'd change the number font to block, and have them yellow with a red outline like the logo. Then some sleeve stripes to go along. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sc49erfan15 Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 Cool idea, this has a lot of promise as I can think of quite a few gas station logos that will translate well.Very clean work, but some suggestions:-Shrink the logo. I'd say about 75% of what it is now. That thing is HUGE.-Add some sleeve stripes, numbers, or at least something on the sleeves. Maybe the full logo with text as a shoulder patch?-Add some white to the yellow jersey as trim, and a red outline to the white numbers on the red jersey. The white numbers get lost, and that hint of red in between the 3 and the yellow body stripe really bugs me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning25 Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 For some reason, the red outline looks awesome on the jersey with the striping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndrewPF Posted June 5, 2011 Author Share Posted June 5, 2011 I'll tweak the Shell uniforms before I do anything more, but in the meantime I've done jerseys for Gulf, including a throwback using 1960s-era logo and colors.Home:Away:Throwback alternate: http://i.imgur.com/4ahMZxD.png koizim said: And...and ya know what we gotta do? We gotta go kick him in da penis. He'll be injured. Injured bad. COYS and Go Sox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 You need to put a little more effort and attention to detail into these. All of your logos, names, and numbers are gigantic, the striping is unimaginative (completely absent on the retro), same applies to the Shell set. Take more time and make the concepts great. There are so many awesome ideas you could be working with for gas stations, you're barely scratching thr creative surface. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 In my 4 or 5 years on these boards, I'd never seen someone do a hockey series using gas stations.You seem surprised that no one has done this before You need to put a lot more effort in these concepts. The size and positioning of the numbers and names are way off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndrewPF Posted June 5, 2011 Author Share Posted June 5, 2011 In my 4 or 5 years on these boards, I'd never seen someone do a hockey series using gas stations.You seem surprised that no one has done this before You need to put a lot more effort in these concepts. The size and positioning of the numbers and names are way off.1. I am surprised. I've seen fast food, airlines, all kinds of stuff. I thought gas stations would be obvious.2. I guess I need some help from someone. What's a good size for the logos, and how can I get things perfectly centered when they don't want to be centered. http://i.imgur.com/4ahMZxD.png koizim said: And...and ya know what we gotta do? We gotta go kick him in da penis. He'll be injured. Injured bad. COYS and Go Sox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnus Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 Here's Imperial Oil... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hathaway Browne Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 That Gulf one needs a baby blue alt. Just like the Aston Martin Racing Team... http://www.astonmartinracing.com/content%5Callsites%5Cimages%5CDBR9%20Gulf%20front%20a_aaae43db-26d9-45c6-9142-6f37126a576a.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 In my 4 or 5 years on these boards, I'd never seen someone do a hockey series using gas stations.You seem surprised that no one has done this before You need to put a lot more effort in these concepts. The size and positioning of the numbers and names are way off.1. I am surprised. I've seen fast food, airlines, all kinds of stuff. I thought gas stations would be obvious.2. I guess I need some help from someone. What's a good size for the logos, and how can I get things perfectly centered when they don't want to be centered.Use the uniforms posted on Sportslogos.net as reference for sizing or look at pictures of uniforms. Use guides on your template to get things centered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndrewPF Posted June 5, 2011 Author Share Posted June 5, 2011 Thanks to everyone for giving me constructive criticism and not being dicks. I really appreciate it http://i.imgur.com/4ahMZxD.png koizim said: And...and ya know what we gotta do? We gotta go kick him in da penis. He'll be injured. Injured bad. COYS and Go Sox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 That Gulf one needs a baby blue alt. Just like the Aston Martin Racing Team... http://www.astonmartinracing.com/content%5Callsites%5Cimages%5CDBR9%20Gulf%20front%20a_aaae43db-26d9-45c6-9142-6f37126a576a.jpgYou misspelled "Ford GT". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndrewPF Posted June 7, 2011 Author Share Posted June 7, 2011 But there's no Gulf branding on the Ford. http://i.imgur.com/4ahMZxD.png koizim said: And...and ya know what we gotta do? We gotta go kick him in da penis. He'll be injured. Injured bad. COYS and Go Sox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Whenever I see those, they scream "NASCAR" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 They all scream "NASCAR" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 They all scream "NASCAR" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 But there's no Gulf branding on the Ford.If is the Gulf Racing Team.The old one was more prominently-labeled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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