JLopesXC Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 Hey everyone, this thread was originally my San Diego Padres concept but I think I'm going to continue some more MLB concepts.I was excited to see a pretty positive response to my Padres logo and I'd really like to stay committed to an actual series. I'm happy to take any and all criticism to make my work better and improve as an artist. The other designers on here really inspire me as cheesy as that may sound. But I'd like to refine my skills when it comes to making logos so I figure since I'm on this site all the time anyways, and I love sports logo designs so much there's no better place to start! So next up I'm revisiting a Tampa Bay Rays concept I had a few months ago. I'll post it on the next page! Thanks everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 Looks good. I don't know why, but I'm really digging the colour scheme. I think bricks under "PADRES" would look bad, so maybe try "1969/Est. 1969", or even "BASEBALL CLUB"? Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLopesXC Posted February 4, 2012 Author Share Posted February 4, 2012 Took bubbas advice adding baseball club and est. 1969. I think this version looks much more complete. What do you guys think? I would like more C+C if possible! ThanksEDIT sorry about the large canvas size, forgot to cut it down before saving... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 That's really, really nice. I love the tropical colors, the swinging friar, and the bricks. Are we going to see a uniform set with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysfan24 Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 WOW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 That looks great! Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 I like what I see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLopesXC Posted February 4, 2012 Author Share Posted February 4, 2012 I've never made a solid attempt at uniforms. I already have scripts made so I suppose I could give it a shot. Could someone send me a template I could use for CS4? That's the only trouble I have is finding templates.Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportstar1212 Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Wow. Looks really good. I hate the Padres new set. I like how it's clean, but it's BORING. Your logo and color scheme is very interesting and would be great for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLopesXC Posted February 5, 2012 Author Share Posted February 5, 2012 Another update, and I think until I get some more advice on anything to change, I'm going to keep it as is.I've put together some scripts but no uniforms, I'll take a stab at a cap logo soon.Let me know what you think of my final update.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 That is the best of all of them so far. Are there going to be any alternate logos and uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hailstateunis Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Took bubbas advice adding baseball club and est. 1969. I think this version looks much more complete. What do you guys think? I would like more C+C if possible! ThanksEDIT sorry about the large canvas size, forgot to cut it down before saving...Like this one alot. http://www.hailstateunis.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
henburg Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Another update, and I think until I get some more advice on anything to change, I'm going to keep it as is.I've put together some scripts but no uniforms, I'll take a stab at a cap logo soon.Let me know what you think of my final update.]This is definetly your best update so far, but there are a couple things that I would do differently. First, I would take away the drop shadow. Next, I would simplify the palm trees, they look like you got them from a photo, which conflicts with the styling of the swinging friar. Other than these nitpicks, I really like it, looks so much better than the bland identity that they went with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 I say take the drop shadow off the PADRES and maybe make the lines between the bricks the lighter teal color-that way it matches the yellow outlined by light teal of the letters. Try cutting off everything below the new curved line you added to the bottom. I think it would look real good and it wouldn't leave a strange place that you feel you have to fill with all the "est. 1969" and "baseball club". https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLopesXC Posted February 5, 2012 Author Share Posted February 5, 2012 Thank you guys (mcrosby and henburg) for the suggestions, I was looking at some color options this afternoon. And once I commit to one of these, I'll take your suggestions into consideration. I just want to get this out of the way first. Which option do y'all think is best?Thanks and keep the C+C coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Bottom left. It has the best colour balance. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hailstateunis Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 B. Top Right http://www.hailstateunis.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
henburg Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 Thank you guys (mcrosby and henburg) for the suggestions, I was looking at some color options this afternoon. And once I commit to one of these, I'll take your suggestions into consideration. I just want to get this out of the way first. Which option do y'all think is best?Thanks and keep the C+C coming!No problem! I always try to contribute to concepts as much as I can. For your concept, I like B the most. The whole roundel things is overdone in baseball and it balances the powder blue and yellow the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 I'm saying B, but C is also fantastic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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