ThePeam Posted August 11, 2013 Share Posted August 11, 2013 I've been working on this logo for about a week now: The concept shows the basic idea for this logo. To me the fish looks pretty bad right now, and I don't know what I should do to fix it. The fish is extremely plain so you guys have more room for opinion.C&C appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted August 11, 2013 Share Posted August 11, 2013 I don't find that bad at all. All you have to do, I think, is clean up the fish. This is really nice right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 YOu want something more recent ? less drawing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 The concept, colors and layout are real cool. There is a lot of fast movement going on between the font and the fish. Its really good. The fish its self may have parts that a bit funky but like Sidney alluded to a less hand drawn version would clean that right up. but the concept as is is really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 YOu want something more recent ? less drawing? Exactly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil G Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 Looks great, but you could clean it up a bit. Bruh check out my last.fm And my Rate Your Music Fantasy Teams: Seattle Spacemen (CFA) Signature credit to Silent Wind of Doom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 Try to use thicker strokes, and more shapes to define features instead of lines.Save as PNG instead of JPEG for future concepts as well, there is less pixelation and makes your concepts look better. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 Update: I added a darker stroke/shadow, cleaned up the fish, changed the green/gold into gold, & added a "texture." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 Ditch the texture, now your fish looks like crumpled paper, and there is a lot of pixelation in your wordmark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 Better?It's definitely getting better, but I did like the other green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 It's definitely getting better, but I did like the other green.Me too...but, Sockeye Salmon aren't Green Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 It's definitely getting better, but I did like the other green.Me too...but, Sockeye Salmon aren't GreenAre Bucks green? . I wouldn't bother changing it, but hey, your series, your choices Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 Yea I love the nod to realism but if theyre from seattle greens kind of a requirement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 Yea I love the nod to realism but if theyre from seattle greens kind of a requirementTrue. Very True. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 Yea I love the nod to realism but if theyre from seattle greens kind of a requirementTrue. Very True.Maybe I'll give them a green alternate jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tynamo Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 It's too detailed for me. Using less lines would clean it up but if you are going for a realistic look, then it's pretty good. and Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred58 Posted August 12, 2013 Share Posted August 12, 2013 I would say that there are too many lines in the gills/fins. lessening those lines will make the logo feel cleaner. also, fewer lines will look better on a jersey/ballcap etc. i'd also look at the shade of green/red that you're using. the updated logo feels a bit muddy to me, but that could be my monitor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 It's too detailed for me. Using less lines would clean it up but if you are going for a realistic look, then it's pretty good. Am I getting warmer?Do you guys have any ideas on how to incorporate green into this logo without changing the main color of the fish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 For fun hears the home & road wordmarks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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