DS729 Posted January 11, 2014 Share Posted January 11, 2014 U're concepts stink man american basketball association had some cool looking logos and some ugly looking logos for league that took on NBA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESTONES6 Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 U're concepts stink man american basketball association had some cool looking logos and some ugly looking logos for league that took on NBACan this be Post of the Day please? Please. Please!Disregard that he used no punctuation what-so-ever, his grammar is disgusting, and I don't see a coherent thought within his post. But I think for the first time in internet history(which is really saying something), someone made a contraction of "u" and "are" to make "u're", the obvious short hand version of "you're."This is staggering. Truly staggering. SAINT IGNATIUS WILDCATS | CLEVELAND BROWNS | CLEVELAND CAVALIERS | CLEVELAND INDIANS | THE OHIO STATE BUCKEYES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwmoore Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 You're doing great considering the short time....better than I could do. Don't let the haters and the trolls get to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 12, 2014 Author Share Posted January 12, 2014 New logo for the Condors, the first one felt empty so I revamped it and I think this is my best one yet. Also this FEEDBACK NEEDED sign really works: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 U're concepts stink man american basketball association had some cool looking logos and some ugly looking logos for league that took on NBACan this be Post of the Day please? Please. Please!Disregard that he used no punctuation what-so-ever, his grammar is disgusting, and I don't see a coherent thought within his post. But I think for the first time in internet history(which is really saying something), someone made a contraction of "u" and "are" to make "u're", the obvious short hand version of "you're."This is staggering. Truly staggering.This is for you sean: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 13, 2014 Author Share Posted January 13, 2014 logo updates:here's the roundel and bird separate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 If I may, try using a picture of a condor or other condor logos as your reference. Condors don't have long straight narrow beaks, so at first look without the word mark one can't really tell it's a condor. Good start though, keep at it. Looking forward to your revision. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 15, 2014 Author Share Posted January 15, 2014 If I may, try using a picture of a condor or other condor logos as your reference. Condors don't have long straight narrow beaks, so at first look without the word mark one can't really tell it's a condor. Good start though, keep at it. Looking forward to your revision.Yes, I'm aware that my bird doesn't look like a condor, you see condors are quite the ugly creature so I figured it wouldn't be a problemRoundel Update:Considering the ugliness of a close up condor I'll probably do a full body and the bird head as a secondary. If you haven't noticed the pace I've been posting at has slowed down a lot. I'll try to get the logos done by Friday and then post unis during the weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 15, 2014 Author Share Posted January 15, 2014 tell me this bird isn't uglyhttp://www.csmonitor.com/Science/2012/0625/California-Condors-face-epidemic-lead-poisoning-finds-study Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted January 15, 2014 Share Posted January 15, 2014 That's definitely an ugly bird. As someone who is also currently working on a bird logo (first attempt), I know how difficult they can be. But I think ren is right in saying that the logo should look more like a condor.For the roundel, the text just needs tweaking to center it better within the arch and curves and it also needs some adjusting along the path. Great start though. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted January 15, 2014 Share Posted January 15, 2014 JT, aside from the bird needing work, the logo looks really good. And what you're doing is unique. Keep up the good work, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 16, 2014 Author Share Posted January 16, 2014 New Alternate Bird Head:I took the advice and made it like a Condor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted January 16, 2014 Share Posted January 16, 2014 I think what you should do is give it more of an appearance of a bald head, since condors have bald heads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted January 16, 2014 Share Posted January 16, 2014 Bakersfield Condors make it work:A lot of things we put into logos are ugly. Spin 'ugly' into 'intimidating'. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted January 16, 2014 Share Posted January 16, 2014 Get in the habit of using reference photos. It will make a world of difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkleton Posted January 20, 2014 Share Posted January 20, 2014 You're doing a great job considering the length of time you've been designing. You could also search for teams which use the same nickname, such as the Bakersfield logo above, just for some reference. Condors aren't the best looking birds about, but they can still look mean! At the moment your latest condor looks a bit like something from Angry Birds!Good work though. The roundel looks pretty retro, which is cool. Just maybe look at the lettering, make it more centered and follow the curve of the roundel a little more closely. Otherwise, always improving, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 20, 2014 Author Share Posted January 20, 2014 Thanks for all the feedback, sorry I'm late. I actually have some of the logos done but not all and I'm going to post them all at once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted January 21, 2014 Author Share Posted January 21, 2014 Okay I've finished the front view logo:Also I'm leaving this series for a week or 2 so that I can work on my other series for the Olympicslink to that is here: http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/96865-if-football-was-in-the-olympics/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted January 23, 2014 Share Posted January 23, 2014 Okay I've finished the front view logo:Also I'm leaving this series for a week or 2 so that I can work on my other series for the Olympicslink to that is here: http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/96865-if-football-was-in-the-olympics/This is an improvement, for sure. It still needs work though. I found a ref image for the pose you've gone with here (it's a big image).I think your beak needs the most help to make it look more condor like, and less cartoony. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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