GMS1122 Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 here we go....i put a lot of hard work into this and i would very much appreciate some comments/critique/suggestions/criticism....WHATEVER!Also, thanks to whchoclte, shiznit1083, and paynomind for all of thier suggestions and comments to bring this logo to the next levelPRIMARY, SECONDARY LOGOS, AND WORDMARKUNIFORMSCOURTP.S. Hoss's is a restaraunt in Erie i work for, so the name fits! GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Excellent set!Other than the floating steering wheel, I think you did quite a fine job! NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi ΓΔΒ! Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Nevermind. It all is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean84106 Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Looking good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Sweetness! Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 and for comparison's sake heres the old version! GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 I'll try to catch you on MSN some time soon... I remember this concept from a while ago... it's improved quite a bit since then! I think there might be one or two things that could take it to the next level.Consistent outlining between the face of the admiral and the rest of him would be one.A white beard would allow you to be able to make the admiral's skin copper, minimizing the number of colours in use.I'd make the numbers on the white jersey white-teal-black-copper (outside-in).I love the Sonics-esque jerseys. The Spiderman Movie font is a great choice for the wordmark. The admiral in the logo is sailor-specific enough to be seen as an admiral, yet presented regally enough to be considered better than just a normal sailor (in this case, to be considered an admiral). That balance has been achieved. The court looks terrific.Way to go GMS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 I'll try to catch you on MSN some time soon... I remember this concept from a while ago... it's improved quite a bit since then! I think there might be one or two things that could take it to the next level.Consistent outlining between the face of the admiral and the rest of him would be one.A white beard would allow you to be able to make the admiral's skin copper, minimizing the number of colours in use.I'd make the numbers on the white jersey white-teal-black-copper (outside-in).I love the Sonics-esque jerseys. The Spiderman Movie font is a great choice for the wordmark. The admiral in the logo is sailor-specific enough to be seen as an admiral, yet presented regally enough to be considered better than just a normal sailor (in this case, to be considered an admiral). That balance has been achieved. The court looks terrific.Way to go GMS. now why cant everyone put thier response's like this!? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MilTownMVP Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 Those probably wouldn't be my choice of colors, but you did a great job with them. The jerseys were clearly influenced by the late 80's-early 90's Sonics, but those are some of my favorite of all time, so that's a good thing.BTW, where did you get that floor template? All the ones I have are that plain puke-brown color and look more like volleyball courts than anything. Dubya's thoughts on "terrorist" nations: "They never stop thinking of new ways to harm our country and our people, and neither do we." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 28, 2004 Author Share Posted June 28, 2004 Those probably wouldn't be my choice of colors, but you did a great job with them. The jerseys were clearly influenced by the late 80's-early 90's Sonics, but those are some of my favorite of all time, so that's a good thing.BTW, where did you get that floor template? All the ones I have are that plain puke-brown color and look more like volleyball courts than anything. i made it well i got the parquet piece from JQK and pasted it around many times to fit the court GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 awsome work! much better than the previous version. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 I like it, except he looks... well, pregnant. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BombSkwad Posted June 28, 2004 Share Posted June 28, 2004 On the new version, he definitely looks..... excited....But overall it is an AWESOME concept!!! KUTGW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 29, 2004 Author Share Posted June 29, 2004 Updated with newet version, fixed the face a little and changed the Home uniform #'s thanks to suggestions form SyPhi and STL FANTAIC GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Updated with newet version, fixed the face a little and changed the Home uniform #'s thanks to suggestions form SyPhi and STL FANTAIC Looks good! Can I see what it looks like with a pissed off sailors face? Kinda liek the one on the Islanders guy they shortly used. I think with an angry mouth this guy would be a definite boat-pimp/bad-ass! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 29, 2004 Author Share Posted June 29, 2004 Updated with newet version, fixed the face a little and changed the Home uniform #'s thanks to suggestions form SyPhi and STL FANTAIC Looks good! Can I see what it looks like with a pissed off sailors face? Kinda liek the one on the Islanders guy they shortly used. I think with an angry mouth this guy would be a definite boat-pimp/bad-ass! want me to try it, or are you asking permission to try yourself? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 good job gmsThe first thing I thought of with the uniforms was the Vancouver Grizzlies. I think your unis resemble the Grizzlies more than the Sonics.I like the basketball/wheel logo. One thing about it though...I think the basketball striping conflicts with the spokes on the wheel. How would the wheel look if the spokes were curved, and the inner circle looked like a basketball, instead of having both of them in there?Your uniforms will looks great worn on players with their heads hanging low after a loss to the Archers Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Great job GMS, These have to be in the top of your best work, even though I was over at your house when you made it. It even looks better when it is complete and posted as one. Keep up the great work and hopefully, hopefully I can one day be as good as you. maybe some day you'll learn how to read as good as me too! GMS1122 - "PLEASE DIRECT ALL COMMENTS TO THIS THREAD! " My bad GMS, I dont read things over to completely. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Updated with newet version, fixed the face a little and changed the Home uniform #'s thanks to suggestions form SyPhi and STL FANTAIC Looks good! Can I see what it looks like with a pissed off sailors face? Kinda liek the one on the Islanders guy they shortly used. I think with an angry mouth this guy would be a definite boat-pimp/bad-ass! want me to try it, or are you asking permission to try yourself? You to try it, you are the chef, I would never touch your food! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 29, 2004 Author Share Posted June 29, 2004 good job gmsThe first thing I thought of with the uniforms was the Vancouver Grizzlies. I think your unis resemble the Grizzlies more than the Sonics.I like the basketball/wheel logo. One thing about it though...I think the basketball striping conflicts with the spokes on the wheel. How would the wheel look if the spokes were curved, and the inner circle looked like a basketball, instead of having both of them in there?Your uniforms will looks great worn on players with their heads hanging low after a loss to the Archers hmmm that would be a pratty cool idea, i'll see what i can do with thatabout losing to the Archers...i was figuring Stampman would have beat you to it by saying those would look great when i lose to the Towers this year. and Steve-O...i'll give it a shot, but i think he'll end up looking more like a monkey than a pissed off sailor dude! GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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