YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 First up da Bills.http://imgur.com/a/c4jqK#0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DCarp1231 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 So far it's good just make the numbers bigger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 I'm so excited first concept!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagle98 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 When I click the link, it says, "llfhockey's images are not publicly available." "Jesus said to him, 'I am the way, and the truth, and the life.'" - John 14:6"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 try now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Raysox's bills concept is much cleaner and a much sharper design. His presentation is top notch too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tifq76 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 So far so good! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Raysox's bills concept is much cleaner and a much more sharper design. His presentation is top notch too.Did I ask you about Raysox's NFL redesign no. I use MS Paint I can only do so much. + imgur is a little pixly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Fixed # size and took # off of helmethttp://llfhockey.imgur.com/all/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Raysox's bills concept is much cleaner and a much more sharper design. His presentation is top notch too.Did I ask you about Raysox's NFL redesign no. I use MS Paint I can only do so much. + imgur is a little pixlyThis shouldn't be an excuse. I still can't see the image because the link is broken for me.However, MS Paint can still make great concepts if you take the time and effort.Also, Inkscape is a free vector software for anyone to download. Sure it might take you a couple of days to learn some basics (I recommend YouTube tutorials) but your concepts will not only be easier to make, but they will look so much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 I'm just trying to give constructive feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Take the logo off the sleeve stripes, it just clutters it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Just got the link to work. The overall opinion I got from it at first glance is a mix of modern and traditional, which can work sometimes but with this I don't think it doesn. With the mix of the brighter red and blue in this concept it gives me a modern feel, especially with the font chosen. However, the modernized look is halted with a very conservative striping pattern. Another thing to point out that I think should be switched. The pants striping is opposite of the ones found on the helmet and jerseys. I think if you flip those to fit the set it would look better. (That's something the actual Bills uniforms also lack, the unified striping throughout the uniform).Overall it's on it's way. Like stated, Execution can be improved, but that can always be improved on. Good start, for your first concept ever it's much better than most I see on these boards and just in general. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Thanks! didn't know aboot that pants stripe I will fix it. In the mean time any more comments before bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Bump Fixed BuffaloNow give all lot of credit to the artist who made toothpaste dolphin and their unis.this took for everhttp://llfhockey.imgur.com/all/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 Its far to similar to the bills,and the helmet needs to stay white or have the logo with a white outline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 It has a faint out line on the helmet and I didn't know what to do for design. I didn't want it to be blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 I like the Bills striping but I would prefer to see the numbers white. That's just a personal preference. I also wouldn't mind you using the throwback logo, but that's also a personal preference. Congrats on the first concept. Try and take the critiques posted from some of the veteran concept posters to tweak up your presentation. The presentation is rough but the concepts aren't half bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 4, 2014 Author Share Posted March 4, 2014 Wonka how do you get templates in from paint and use them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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