patsox Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 I will be taking requests for signatures in this style:If you would like one, please tell me which team(s) you would like and what logo you would like for each team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted June 25, 2009 Share Posted June 25, 2009 The image has to be reduced to 85% of it's size. It's too large for a sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 25, 2009 Author Share Posted June 25, 2009 What is your resolution? It looks fine on my screen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Yeah, it looks fine on my screen as well. It's clean patsox, which is good, but it kinda lacks in color. Ya know what I'm saying? Don't get me wrong, I like the sig, but the transition from green to grey looks a little weird. I know the Celts only use green/white on their uniforms, but maybe you could transition from green to gold. And continue to do that with other teams with their primary and alternate colors.Again, that's just a suggestion. I think the sig looks good, I just think it could be more colorful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Yeah, gold would be a decent choice, that or black because its part of their scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Yeah, it looks fine on my screen as well. It's clean patsox, which is good, but it kinda lacks in color. Ya know what I'm saying? Don't get me wrong, I like the sig, but the transition from green to grey looks a little weird. I know the Celts only use green/white on their uniforms, but maybe you could transition from green to gold. And continue to do that with other teams with their primary and alternate colors.Again, that's just a suggestion. I think the sig looks good, I just think it could be more colorful.Agreed. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 What is your resolution? It looks fine on my screen.Oh, I forgot my computer is only 1024 x 768, so that's just my problem I guess. But anyway these look good except the aforementioned color problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 26, 2009 Author Share Posted June 26, 2009 I'll work on the things that were mentioned. I never really saw it as lacking color, but now that I look at it again I can see what you all are talking about. I thought these were there, but apparently they aren't quite yet. I'll definitely see what I can do, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Well, by taking comments and criticism, applying the suggestions to your design, fixing your mistakes, and creating a clean concept, you're showing members here that you are trying to produce something reputable. By doing so maybe some members that have almost given up on you will see your progress and, (I can't really put this any other way), make fun of, or be mean to you. I look forward to see what you can do, and I may request one to use as my sig. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 26, 2009 Author Share Posted June 26, 2009 Improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Improvement?Yes, much better than the original. I'd suggest trying a different font for the team name though, it's kind of boring.Try a different logo for the background so you're not repeating the same one three times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Improvement?Yes, much better than the original. I'd suggest trying a different font for the team name though, it's kind of boring.Try a different logo for the background so you're not repeating the same one three times.I agree, you could use the cursive script or the jersey wordmark. As for the background logo, you should probably use the primary or vice versa. Looking better, keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 26, 2009 Author Share Posted June 26, 2009 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 The background looks too busy with the logo and full team name. Each one you have shown has been an imporvement over the previous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 26, 2009 Author Share Posted June 26, 2009 What do you think of this one? I still managed to include the team script without making stand out so much. I think this makes everything look a little less busy. Instead of putting the primary logo in the background, I put the alternate logo there and placed the primary logo in the center. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 I think they're getting a lot better. In my opinion, the first update is the best. With suggestions that DP and CAB made, I think you can turn that into something really nice without making it look too busy. Good work with these so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 What do you think of this one? I still managed to include the team script without making stand out so much. I think this makes everything look a little less busy. Instead of putting the primary logo in the background, I put the alternate logo there and placed the primary logo in the center. I think having the logo overtop of another logo gets too distracting. Have the type over the background logo and a smaller logo off to the side like your first update, I think that's the best option to keep everything visible and not too busy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Mode Posted June 26, 2009 Share Posted June 26, 2009 Improvement?Maybe put the primary in the background. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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