shaydre1019 Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 I made this a few months back and just recently got internet at my house. Let me know what you guys think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Pretty damn good!! I would make the snake and ball a little bigger, see how that looks.Are you going to make some kits? Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 I would make the blue thicker, taking away some negative white space, then putting the star in the middle, so the points aren't coming out. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnsonville Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Perhaps you could center the stars below the snake/ball? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin W. Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 Sorry to be a downer, but I don't like it. It looks too much like a club team's logo and not like a logo of a soccer federation. It's far too informal. Mighty Ducks of Anaheim (CHL - 2018 Orr Cup Champions) Chicago Rivermen (UBA/WBL - 2014, 2015, 2017 Intercontinental Cup Champions) King's Own Hexham FC (BIP - 2022 Saint's Cup Champions) Portland Explorers (EFL - Elite Bowl XIX Champions) Real San Diego (UPL) Red Bull Seattle (ULL - 2018, 2019, 2020 Gait Cup Champions) Vancouver Huskies (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 I like the logo, but I agree with making the snake/ball bigger, and maybe making the blue roundel thicker as well.The other thing I notice is that the arch of the text doesn't follow the arc of the circle... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaydre1019 Posted February 19, 2012 Author Share Posted February 19, 2012 I guess I could see how it doesn't look formal, but Iour current shield is a joke, IMO.So I guess the consensus is get rid of the empty space in the middle.The text is off, I made it in like 20 minutes at school (I was hoping no one caught that) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 this is a solid concept, but there is a lot of space issues that keeps it from being great.1st the typography. it needs to be larger by at least a few points. you want the type to fill the roundel just a bit more. think of the old Starbucks logo or this one as referencethe type alignment is off as noted. both top and bottom. be more attentive to those details. once the type size is increased, it need more room to breath. make the blue circle larger as well. the other space issue is that of the snake like others have said. dont bring it all the way out to the edges but definitely make it bigger. maybe even crop it so its just the snakes head in the circle? im not familiar with the soccer club but m guessing they already use this snake/ball icon?? it needs work. the line work is awful. especially within the ball. maybe something to work on as well GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schtee Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 I can't speak for the technical stuff but it's a fantastic concept and loads better than the current crest. @aghease Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaydre1019 Posted February 19, 2012 Author Share Posted February 19, 2012 Thanks for the feedback guys, i really appreciate it. I took your advice and updated it a bit. Please keep the comments coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schmity Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 Thanks for the feedback guys, i really appreciate it. I took your advice and updated it a bit. Please keep the comments coming.dude this turned out really cool, thumbs up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 Looks much better, and still could go a bit further. Maybe take some inspiration from that Staubach's logo and add a white stripe to go under the star with a red stripe above and below that. Just to give it a touch more of an American feel using stars and bars. The crest might benefit from a touch of silver or gold (and i emphasize might).Overall I do like what you have, and a couple small details could make this logo really stand out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaydre1019 Posted February 20, 2012 Author Share Posted February 20, 2012 Thank you, sirs. I thought about a silver outline and it looked kinda cool but I left it out because it seems the usmnt switches from old to silver every other year.I might play around with the line idea see what I think looks best. I just wanna make sure I don't clutter it because I wanna keep it as simple as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LPBW Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 I kind of wish they used a fresh take on the WC '94 logo as their banner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaydre1019 Posted February 20, 2012 Author Share Posted February 20, 2012 I could be wrong, but I think the consensus is that a soccer ball going up is never really a good thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaydre1019 Posted February 20, 2012 Author Share Posted February 20, 2012 put it on one of the leaked pictures to see how it would work out on the new jerseys.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sport Billy Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 WTF?All you did is steal this Nike logo from their "Don't Tread On Me" campaign with the USMNT and put a circle around it.Stealing logos and passing them off as your own is uncool and unlawful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 WTF?All you did is steal this Nike logo from their "Don't Tread On Me" campaign with the USMNT and put a circle around it.Stealing logos and passing them off as your own is uncool and unlawful.+1. You could have at least illustrated your own snake-ball combo to get across this idea. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcb05 Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 I feel like the snake/ball image is pretty well-known, and I don't think anyone else (nor the OP) was under the impression that was an original design by him. He simply took it and re-purposed it into a different crest. Nothing wrong with this, guys tweak or borrow from existing logos in their concepts all of the time on this board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted February 20, 2012 Share Posted February 20, 2012 WTF?All you did is steal this Nike logo from their "Don't Tread On Me" campaign with the USMNT and put a circle around it.Stealing logos and passing them off as your own is uncool and unlawful.At no point did he claim it as his own, and it is pretty well known where it is from. Please shut up and stop being a curmudgeon. If you must, go yell at someone who does a concept that *gasp* utilizes the same logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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