Broncoboy7 Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 21 minutes ago, Jvhn177 said: Get rid of the line behind the mountains Ditto to that. Just looks too busy up there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 21, 2016 Author Share Posted February 21, 2016 How's this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvhn177 Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 Much better, I like the addition of the sublimated mountain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 Thats better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panthers_2012 Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Really solid concept! Can't wait to see the uniforms! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoeDGemma Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Love this concept, but there's still an issue with the centering, I believe it's with this space around DENVER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 22 minutes ago, JoeDGemma said: Love this concept, but there's still an issue with the centering, I believe it's with this space around DENVER. Didn't notice that. I'll fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 @JoeDGemma that should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 You've made some great progress so far. Here are a couple of changes I'd make to take it to the next level 1. Lose the sublimated mountain. The logo is busy as is, and it doesn't add anything 2. Move the picks to the outside of the roundel. They'd look a lot better out there and it would remove more of the clutter 3. I'd remove the "Nuggets" banner, and replace the "Basketball" text with Nuggets. That way you could make the skyline bigger and lose even more clutter 4. Take the shadow off of the basketball. It worked originally when you had a simpler logo, but all of the elements makes it superfluous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 @jmoe12 Alrighty, I will definitely take these into account. One concern; You mention removing the banner, and while it's understandable...what should replace it? Maybe a thicker line so the skyline could rest on that? I feel like I should keep the banner for the separation between the skyline and the basketball. Sorry if it isn't clear. I'll remove the basketball and highlights. Thank you all for your interest! Another update coming tomorrow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Just now, timberwolf said: Alrighty, I will definitely take these into account. One concern; You mention removing the banner, and while it's understandable...what should replace it? Maybe a thicker line so the skyline could rest on that? I feel like I should keep the banner for the separation between the skyline and the basketball. Sorry if it isn't clear. I'll remove the basketball and highlights. Thank you all for your interest! Another update coming tomorrow! Removing the banner may not be necessary, but I'm not sure it's working as-is. The navy rectangle behind the banner is killing it for me. It might work to stretch the banner so it goes outside the roundel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 2 minutes ago, jmoe12 said: Removing the banner may not be necessary, but I'm not sure it's working as-is. The navy rectangle behind the banner is killing it for me. It might work to stretch the banner so it goes outside the roundel. I see. That may look good. I'll try it tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 Perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 22, 2016 Author Share Posted February 22, 2016 Alright here's yet another update! This goes heavily on what @jmoe12 said. -removed all shadows or sublimations -moved axes outside the roundel - extended banner outside roundel and outline as such Rip it apart! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulv! Posted February 22, 2016 Share Posted February 22, 2016 It does look so good now! Nice work elaborating all the tips! The stretched out banner works in the right way dividing the skyline from the basketball. In my opinion it is an important part of your logo. My Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted February 23, 2016 Share Posted February 23, 2016 I like removing the mountain sublimation and stretching out the banner, but everything else seems like a downgrade from what you had. The update is certainly really nice, but I feel like the previous one was a little bit more streamlined and whole, and I liked having the basketball with shadows. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 23, 2016 Author Share Posted February 23, 2016 12 hours ago, Zeus89725 said: I like removing the sublimation and stretching out the banner, but everything else seems like a downgrade from what you had. The update is certainly really nice, but I feel like the previous one was a little bit more streamlined and whole. I feel like I should keep the axes inside the roundel... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted February 23, 2016 Share Posted February 23, 2016 2 hours ago, timberwolf said: I feel like I should keep the axes inside the roundel... I agree completely. I like the axes outside the roundel, but inside is better. That's what I was saying. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted February 23, 2016 Author Share Posted February 23, 2016 Alright well here's update number 5/6....I don't even know. Not a full overhaul, but a significant change. I took the axes off the sides and put on in the basketball. I added "speed lines" to provide movement, and some modernness. Not really sure what to think of it, but rip it apart! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvhn177 Posted February 23, 2016 Share Posted February 23, 2016 I like the pick axes on the outside better, and side note, I don't know if this was intentional, but the yellow/gold seems darker than the nuggets actual yellow/gold color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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