dgnmrwrw Posted March 4, 2006 Share Posted March 4, 2006 I've been skeptical of the Swift jersey's viability, mostly because of the cookie-cutter stuff that seemed to dominate the Olympics. But I think there are certain NHL teams it could work for, if properly used. So here's my first of a few ideas to come:It's still a work in progress, so C+C is very welcome. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted March 4, 2006 Share Posted March 4, 2006 I'm not sure what others will say but I sure like it! Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phayze Posted March 4, 2006 Share Posted March 4, 2006 I like this too. I think the back might look better if the waist stripes were symmetrical, but overall, it's cool. Are you going to make the home and alternate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon_Matrix Posted March 4, 2006 Share Posted March 4, 2006 Move the patches closer to the collar and the numbers where the patches are and it will look correct. Because Korbyn Is Colour Blind, My Signature Is Now Idiot Proof - Thanks Again Braden!!Go Leafs Go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davey Posted March 4, 2006 Share Posted March 4, 2006 Its looking good, i cant think of anything but i'll get back to you when i do lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted March 4, 2006 Author Share Posted March 4, 2006 Move the patches closer to the collar and the numbers where the patches are and it will look correct. Actually, having the numbers on the shoulders, like some teams did in the Olympics, drove me NUTS. I want the numbers to stay in the same region that NHL teams currently use. And yes, there will be a home and alternate to come. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted March 4, 2006 Share Posted March 4, 2006 I like the placements of the patches and numbers. The only things I suggest is to move the name higher so that it doesn't sit on a seam and shrink the back numbers just a bit. Right now they seem overpowering. I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 I like the bottom of the jersey - very clean looking - nice work!!!  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
][ncognito Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 Aside from the fact that it's on a swift template, I actually like it. Not too shabby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilgump Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 me gusta, exspecially because you use the alt. logo. The World Basketball Championship, the Davis Cup, Ryder Cup, Iraq: Every day there's further proof that we, as a nation, are not very good at international competition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 Nice, Very Nice. But it would look better as a Caps jersey. Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 I'd say add stars to the top of the sleeve stripes like they currently have. I really like these, they look sharp. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NEPats Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted March 5, 2006 Author Share Posted March 5, 2006 Thanks for the feedback everyone. I've added the home sweater to the first post. Alternate to come soon. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon_Matrix Posted March 5, 2006 Share Posted March 5, 2006 If you change the grey on the blue jersey to white, you'll have a winner. Because Korbyn Is Colour Blind, My Signature Is Now Idiot Proof - Thanks Again Braden!!Go Leafs Go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 love the color choices, it is really similar to something i started a week ago, but abandoned. great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 If you change the grey on the blue jersey to white, you'll have a winner. The thing is, I really wanted to make grey very prominent, maybe even more so than the red. I tried a couple of versions of the home sweater, but this is the only one that had the balance I wanted between the grey and the red. One of them had a thin white stripe between the two (like the grey stripe on the white sweater), but then I lost that sharp distinction between grey and red that the blue creates. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon_Matrix Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 If you change the grey on the blue jersey to white, you'll have a winner. The thing is, I really wanted to make grey very prominent, maybe even more so than the red. I tried a couple of versions of the home sweater, but this is the only one that had the balance I wanted between the grey and the red. One of them had a thin white stripe between the two (like the grey stripe on the white sweater), but then I lost that sharp distinction between grey and red that the blue creates. I didn't even know there was an ounce of grey on the white one until you mentioned it, but if you want grey to stand out on the blue one, use more of it on the other one, otherwise it looks very out of place. Because Korbyn Is Colour Blind, My Signature Is Now Idiot Proof - Thanks Again Braden!!Go Leafs Go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 If you change the grey on the blue jersey to white, you'll have a winner. The thing is, I really wanted to make grey very prominent, maybe even more so than the red. I tried a couple of versions of the home sweater, but this is the only one that had the balance I wanted between the grey and the red. One of them had a thin white stripe between the two (like the grey stripe on the white sweater), but then I lost that sharp distinction between grey and red that the blue creates. I didn't even know there was an ounce of grey on the white one until you mentioned it, but if you want grey to stand out on the blue one, use more of it on the other one, otherwise it looks very out of place. I'm really surprised you couldn't see the grey stripes on the white jersey. I may need to darken the grey.Here's the pattern I was trying to maintain:On the light (white) sweater, there are two dark colors (blue and red) separated by a relatively light color (grey). So on the dark (blue) sweater, I wanted to keep the grey and red (which are now relatively light) separated by the darker blue. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
westcoastoiler Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 I totally love these man, great job! I would actually buy this jersey. I agree to put the patch closer to the collar and then place the numbers where the patches were. But that is picky. I prefer the secondary logo too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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