phoenixsplash Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 comments, tips. go crazy. i hold up to extreme criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 1. You need to fix your Spartans one before you move on. Please do that.2. When you're done with that, see 3.3. Two different kinds of purple? BAD!4. Lower case name on nameplate? BAD!5. Again, you're using a design on the front without taking into consideration the fact that it my illegible with a double digit number.Not a bad idea, but it needs tweaking. But only after you finish the other one first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 comments, tips. go crazy. i hold up to extreme criticism.My eyes! Dear God, my eyes!1. Logo not centered on front of jersey.2. Lowercase letters on back? Really? Lowercase?3. Front number is a different shade of purple than back number.4. Numbering is difficult to make out.5. Purple and gray? Really? Purple and gray? "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 If you made the number white, It surprisingly wouldn't be that bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Damn....this one one crazy-ass concept. The entire design is just awful (sorry, but it's the truth). The stripes are totally insane. I mean, the lightning bolts are all over the place. This is actually one of the worst designs I've ever seen. Plus, you need to fix your other equally terrible concepts before moving onto another one, okay? Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Well, it certainly is out there and crazy, but it's not sloppy like a patsox concept. I agree in making the number white, and I would get rid of the bolt stripe from behind the number, no need to have anything there but a number.I also think that white would look so much better than gray, maybe outline the bolts in gray.Also try and have the bolt on the helmet coming out from the front, like the Eagles' helmet. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Damn....this one one crazy-ass concept.Koizim, you are my hero. "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Who made this concept..... HOMER SIMPSON?! Either him or it was some fashion designer in a drunken stupor! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 The lightning bolts look more like American Indian patterns than lightning bolts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 The lightning bolts look more like American Indian patterns than lightning bolts.It's like... The Phoenix Coyote and Charlie Brown had a baby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 The lightning bolts look more like American Indian patterns than lightning bolts.It's like... The Phoenix Coyote and Charlie Brown had a baby. lol I see what you did there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 Here you go.That style doesn't work at all. It reminds me of that roller hockey logo, a purple dragon with a crazy wordmark, I can't think of the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 Honestly, this is less creative than had you simply copied this guy: https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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