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I think you've got too much of a clash of styles going on here -- the skyline looks too "real" to fit in with the rest of the logo. Plus, the skyline has a lot of tiny little details that would be next to impossible to reproduce in embroidery or even screenprinting.

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Yen, and no.

Yes:

Love the idea.

No:

Dislike the blurriness of the skyline, i live in Dallas so i already have and idea, you should try to adjust the blurriness?

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Unfortunately, the Dallas skyline isn't nearly iconic enough to be effective in silhouette form.

Also, what's with the Mercedes-Benz logo in there?

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Unfortunately, the Dallas skyline isn't nearly iconic enough to be effective in silhouette form.

I agree... try using just the reunion tower (the building with the big ball at the top). It may not be on the level of a Statue of Liberty or Gateway Arch, but it's Dallas' most iconic landmark and it would get rid of some of the clutter in the logo.

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I think you're kind of forcing it with the skyline idea.

Either way, you have too many outlines and it just seems that the colors look a little muddled together. Maybe some more white in there would break it up, you know? Like don't have the green and gold touching...have white in between.

SIDE NOTE: It's not as easy as you thought, eh? One of the great and terrible things about this site is that it empowers us all to think that we can do concepts as good as what we see here. I think you owe Matt an apology. :P

On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said:

Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech.

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I think you're kind of forcing it with the skyline idea.

Either way, you have too many outlines and it just seems that the colors look a little muddled together. Maybe some more white in there would break it up, you know? Like don't have the green and gold touching...have white in between.

SIDE NOTE: It's not as easy as you thought, eh? One of the great and terrible things about this site is that it empowers us all to think that we can do concepts as good as what we see here. I think you owe Matt an apology. :P

I did apologize :P

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[beating a dead horse]Blah, blah, blah...[/beating a dead horse]

At least he listens to C&C.

On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said:

Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech.

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