BJBerthiaume Posted December 1, 2008 Author Share Posted December 1, 2008 Sorry it took so long, I have just been so busy the last couple weeks, but finally here are the Blue Jackets.Enjoy, C&C.Senators next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 The side panel is too big and too blocky. Try making it smaller, and streamlining it. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 The side panel is too big and too blocky. Try making it smaller, and streamlining it.Totally agree, the big rectangle on the sides doesn't look good. Try smaller and rounder. Great idea though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 Also, the numbers are a tad too big, you wouldn't be able to fit a 23 on there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted December 2, 2008 Share Posted December 2, 2008 I agree with the others, the stars and the numbers are way to big. Shrink them down some and I think you are on the right track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 14, 2008 Author Share Posted December 14, 2008 Finally here are the Senators. I think this turned out pretty good. I went with the helmet leaf things, and tried to keep the black and white swoosh effect on the sleeves.Capitals next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 14, 2008 Author Share Posted December 14, 2008 BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 14, 2008 Author Share Posted December 14, 2008 No C&C? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted December 14, 2008 Share Posted December 14, 2008 No C&C? For the Senators, I would incorporate more gold, preferably on the helmet and the pants, and maybe some more laurel wreath stripes. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 Capitals: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 27, 2008 Author Share Posted December 27, 2008 Here are the Islanders. Unfortunately, this may be the last concept because C&C has been lacking greatly lately. Without further adeu, here are the Islanders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgess Posted December 28, 2008 Share Posted December 28, 2008 You're doing a great job - it'd be a shame to see these excellent concepts be stopped.That said, I do have some thoughts.The logo on the Capitals' helmet seems a tad big for me.For the Blue Jackets, maybe try using their new awesome script above the front numbers.Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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