ChuckDownfield Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 not sure about Korea. The logo seems too thin GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 14, 2009 Author Share Posted March 14, 2009 9/16: CanadaHalf way through!I actually had this idea for a while. Similar jerseys as Puerto Rico. Red sleves, with a stripe running up to the neck. I didn't know will I was done, that's what Canada's jersey looks like. On the road, I turned all the white, to red. Then to give it some pizzas, I coloured the part of the leve between the piping, and crease white. Just see for yourself.Oh, I also tried to limit the use of black. Such as getting rid of the black hat.No clue who''s next. Requests? Or maybe, I'll suprise you.Edit: wow, just got that in on time. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted March 14, 2009 Share Posted March 14, 2009 With the Canada jersey, you need to either recolour the wordmark on the away, or recolour the NOB and numbers. I'm also not sold on the little patches of white on the away jerseys- I imagine they would look quite strange on the field. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis2051 Posted March 14, 2009 Share Posted March 14, 2009 No clue who''s next. Requests? Or maybe, I'll suprise you.I'd be interested to see your take on Italy, if you have the chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCap Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I like Korea's. Not sold on Canada's. The black wordmark on the road, the black piping, the arm pit stripes, and the yokes aren't doing it for me. PotD 26/2/12 1/7/15 2020 BASS Spin the Wheel, Make the Deal Regular Season Champion 2021 BASS NFL Pick'em Regular Season Champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 15, 2009 Author Share Posted March 15, 2009 Day 10: Italy(Late)Sorry once again guys. I had like no computer time yesterday. I bring you my Italy concept. I don't like how the cap is a block I, so I but the I from the script on the cap.(Looks like Cleveland's hats). On the slves, I made stripes resembleing the Italian flag. That's really all I can think of that I changed.So 10 down 6 more. I'll see if I can do another one today. Maybe Cuba?C&CI'm about to start another concept on my EPL kit redesign, because I have a new series I'm REALLY excited to start.Stay tuned. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 So then you'll have, what, like 7 unfinished series going on? Also, just an observation, but I have rarely ever seen you listen to c+c that people give you in any of you threads, especially in this series. Many suggestions have been made but all have been ignored. What's the point on people commenting and giving criticism if it isn't put to good use? The only time you don't need to make updates is if the concepts are perfect and most of these are far from it. As for your latest one, the cap logo looks like a J when it isn't next to a wordmark. The flag piping is pretty good but it doesn't match the solid blue or white piping at all. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted March 15, 2009 Share Posted March 15, 2009 I would stick with gray jerseys for the road. Italy's gray jerseys are some of the best road jerseys I've seen. I would like to see a little more blue on the home jerseys too. Maybe do something creative like you've done with a lot of the other teams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 15, 2009 Author Share Posted March 15, 2009 elliot, I know, I plan to finish this series, and a couple more before I start my next one. I will also redo all the ones that people said to when I get all 16 done.Don't worry. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 16, 2009 Author Share Posted March 16, 2009 Day 11: CubaReally, the main focus on this concept was to get rid of those horrid monochrome red jerseys. I just put swooshes on the sleves., then changed the pants colour. Not much ,Enjoy.Any requests for next?Teams left:USATaipeiPuerto RicoPanamaDominican Republic @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 16, 2009 Author Share Posted March 16, 2009 Day 12: TaipeiWow, I've had to type this 3 times...(internet explorer is being an ass)No takers on requests, so I just did Taipei. The only major change was side paneling, on their jerseys. I used the Texans font to try and match the hat logo.I actually really like the new hat template, it shows the hat design better.Requests, or I'll surprise you for tomorrow. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 Requests, or I'll surprise you for tomorrow.USA USA USA USA USA USA!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 Day 12: TaipeiWow, I've had to type this 3 times...(internet explorer is being an ass)No takers on requests, so I just did Taipei. The only major change was side paneling, on their jerseys. I used the Texans font to try and match the hat logo.I actually really like the new hat template, it shows the hat design better.Requests, or I'll surprise you for tomorrow.I would expect something more creative from you for CT. This design seems uninspired, especially the wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rdsx246 Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 I agree with patsox, it looks to me like you just sort of rushed through Taipei in order to get to the US and Dominican Republic faster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 Not so much rushed, more like ran out of good ideas.also, the script is the one the team uses. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 19, 2009 Author Share Posted March 19, 2009 Day 13(late): PanamaSorry guys, I've been pretty busy the last 2 days. So here is my concept for yesterday. It's for Panama. Nothing special, some piping, and a block font.I'm getting low on good ideas...Tomorrow, I'll try to get Puerto Rico, AND the Dominican Republic.I'm saving the US for last, cause I want a new logo set. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 19, 2009 Author Share Posted March 19, 2009 Day 14(Late): Puerto RicoHey guys. I plan to post 2 today, this one, and the DR later. This was inspired by a shirt the coach on the other team was wearing at my baseball game. I'm suprised about how the Predators font goes so well the PR logo. Oh, and I used a block font instead of the Nashville letters.DR will be up later, then the USA.Btw, the US will have new logos. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Mode Posted March 19, 2009 Share Posted March 19, 2009 I agree with patsox, it looks to me like you just sort of rushed through Taipei in order to get to the US and Dominican Republic faster.I couldn't agree more. After your Chinese writing for China, I thought Taipei was going to be a good one. You should try the Chinese writing for this one, IMO. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 19, 2009 Author Share Posted March 19, 2009 I agree with patsox, it looks to me like you just sort of rushed through Taipei in order to get to the US and Dominican Republic faster.I couldn't agree more. After your Chinese writing for China, I thought Taipei was going to be a good one. You should try the Chinese writing for this one, IMO.Yeah, I actually just realized i did that while working on my DR concept.I'm working on a rebrand for the Royals right now, but I'll get to it @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted March 19, 2009 Share Posted March 19, 2009 The Puerto Rico jerseys are hot, nice job on those. I like how you emphasized red over blue rather than using them equally and interchangably like how a lot of teams are doing this year.-Brian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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