Number 8 Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 This is my first post so im new here. What do you think? My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 Sweet Baby Jesus... Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number 8 Posted December 9, 2009 Author Share Posted December 9, 2009 I know the numbers suck My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primal Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 At the risk of scaring myself, I actually like the blurred band around the torso. But the arm striping doesn't match up in any way and the nameplate and number would be illegible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 You owe me a new keyboard. This one is drenched in spit-out hot chocolate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 i too liked the blurred band around the torso, but thats where my liking stops. the rest needs some clarification and legibility. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDR Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 It looks inspired by a seismograph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnnygriswold Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 What's that white squiggle under the crown? PuckDrawn.com - Hockey designMy sports logo portfolioSportDrawn.com - All Sports designPuckDrawn on Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDR Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 What's that white squiggle under the crown?Because pixelation is extreme? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quillz Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 Not really a fan of the purple gradient or w/e underneath the primary logo. The number font is a bit too dark and small, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 Well I will start with two things.You would be unable to read the numbers from afar, a white or lighter color would be much better suited. The nameplate looks really odd with the purple behind it, they are the Kings not the Flyers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 What's with all the white/grey lines at the top of the jersey? Did you forget to erase them from the template?It's an interesting idea you've got, but you really need to clean it up before you post it, and I think you need to try to make sure everything matches and is legible. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
veinyp3nis Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 too 90's man, but great try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number 8 Posted December 9, 2009 Author Share Posted December 9, 2009 Yeah its my first, so i probably do need more practice. Ill try to clean it up My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted December 9, 2009 Share Posted December 9, 2009 Yeah its my first, so i probably do need more practice. Ill try to clean it upWe have all been at the same place.Just keep a good attitude and you will make huge improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number 8 Posted December 9, 2009 Author Share Posted December 9, 2009 I tried to touch it up a bit My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broncos711 Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 I tried to touch it up a bitYIKES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 I tried to touch it up a bitYIKES!Dude what's your problem?This isn't bad for a first try. It's certainly an interesting idea but seems to me something that would be on a fashion jersey more than a full-time jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 When I first saw this, all I could think of is that certain word that I shoudn't say.So....advice?? Start by losing all gradients and see where it goes from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 you know... you guys laugh, but this doesn't look too far off from those robo-pigeon pittsburgh sweaters.i could actually see this being worn in the 90's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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