chickenfish13 Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 So, since this is my break week from our NHL rebrand, i got bored, and decided to take on the Colorado Rockies. I don't really like the execution of the current logo, but I dont feel as if the concept is too bad. I don't like the black in their, so i changed the scheme to just purple, silver, and white. The sleeve patch is just the mountains, and the cap logo is the C. I dont have much too say as I didnt do anything to drastic, so i look forward to your c and c. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 I like it, but it needs work. I think the baseball looks completely forced, random, and small. I don't like how the grey part outlining Rockies isn't straight, I think it should be flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 17, 2010 Author Share Posted July 17, 2010 nevermind dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 This is a great update. There still needs to be a bit more work on outlining for the primary logo and more detail for the cap logo, but good stuff thus far. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 I agree, the baseball in the primary logo is very tiny. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 Try cleaning up the whitecaps on the mountains. Right now they look very jagged and sloppy, if you clean them up a bit it will help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 Snowcaps look jaggedy, baseball is too small, "Rockies" text need to fit the width of the rest of the logo. trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 18, 2010 Author Share Posted July 18, 2010 The snowcaps are supposed to be jaggedy, that was actually intentional. Thanks for the replies about the other stuff, I'll try and have an update soon. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 Alright.Can't wait, I know it's gonna be good! trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knnhrvy16 Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 I like where this is going, great start! Along with the suggestions of others, I'd also like to add that I think the ball should still be shooting towards the right like the original. An original logo with the ball in the middle of the mountains was turned down before the team began play because it "looked like a pop-fly", and was tweaked to give the ball a more forceful streak and moved the trajectory towards the right to give it a look more reminiscent of a home run (or at least a well-hit ball). I think that's the same need that needs to be adressed here. Change that, and I think it'll be a fantastic logo. Keep up the good work, I like this alot! The opinions I express are mine, and mine only. If I am to express them, it is not to say you or anyone else is wrong, and certainly not to say that I am right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 the wordmark reads colo rado to me...tighten that up a bit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 Looks really good, loving the C, just gotta grow that baseball and fix Colo rado. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brosephb26 Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 Very well done but it needs something - I think it needs some more black and or white and a bigger baseball hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted July 18, 2010 Share Posted July 18, 2010 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 18, 2010 Author Share Posted July 18, 2010 OK, heres an update. I left the ball in the middle still, but if enough of you think it shouldnt be there, i'll change it. I also didn't change the colorado, as I wondering what you guys think i should do with it... should i just move them in closer to the middle, make the letters a bit bigger? The thing im thinking is either way theres going to be empty space underneath the C and O, or theres just the empty space above the mountain. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 I don't like the separation of COLO and RADO. If the second O is slightly obscured by the peak of the mountain, so be it. It looks a bit awkward otherwise. On a related note, the word COLORADO doesn't appear to follow a circular path. Rather, it looks like you rotated each letter individually, leaving some of them looking a little too rotated or a little under-rotated.There's nothing wrong with the snow-caps/highlights. Frankly, I don't even know if they should be interpreted as snow on the mountain tops as opposed to simple highlights as during most of the Rockies' season, there's no snow on the first ridge of the Front Range which are visible from downtown Denver anyway.The ball could stand to be bigger.Lastly, I think this thing still needs black or another color. Otherwise, it's a team that's only got one color outside of grey and white. I realize that grey (or silver) would be your second color, but I guess when I see grey in a baseball logo/concept it's almost like seeing white in a football concept. It's sort of a color that has to be there because that's what the away uniform will be. While I think that the Rockies have gone way overboard with their use of black, when it's used as a trim color with purple and grey (silver), it works well. I don't know where exactly you'd put the black in the logo though, because over-outlining should be avoided. (You've got two outlines on ROCKIES already, and that's certainly enough for example.) Maybe the stitches on the ball or shadows on the mountains? Just suggestions.It's solid, well-rendered work. Keep going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 Rotate the O and R to add more of a smooth curve up top and rotate each letter to follow that curve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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