Lights Out Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Thoughts? POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrCanadian999 Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 there ok but nothing special. they remind me of these http://www.sportslogos.net/logo.php?id=emaz7ibs36tg6f7ay2se Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Maybe as a cheap fashion jersey... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loogodude90 Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 I think either of them could work as an alternate. WIZARDS ORIOLES CAPITALS RAVENS UNITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." I like them alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." I like them alotSeriously?I'm not too keen on the jerseys. I like the breakup of all the red though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 There's no point in doing something modern, creative or unique if it doesn't make the design better or if it doesn't act as part of a cohesive whole. This is the biggest point I feel you fail to understand with many of your concepts. There's a certain harmony that needs to be achieved in uniting a logo, design element(s) and the essential information that gives a uniform its function. This doesn't achieve any sort of visual harmony. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oddball Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 This looks more like a t-shirt you see on a 6th grader than a hockey jersey. Nice idea though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." I like them alotSeriously?I'm not too keen on the jerseys. I like the breakup of all the red though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 I don't think I like them, but they catch my eye in a good way. Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMW79 Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 Guess I'd better go die in a hole. I applaud your effort, but I don't like these at all. The racing stripes and the angled font take the wheel motif too far into a tacky NASCAR realm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted March 26, 2011 Author Share Posted March 26, 2011 There's no point in doing something modern, creative or unique if it doesn't make the design better or if it doesn't act as part of a cohesive whole. This is the biggest point I feel you fail to understand with many of your concepts. There's a certain harmony that needs to be achieved in uniting a logo, design element(s) and the essential information that gives a uniform its function. This doesn't achieve any sort of visual harmony.I see your point, and if I was actually designing a new uniform for the Red Wings, I'd obsess over the tiny details that would make the design harmonious. But many of my concepts on here are spur-of-the moment ideas that I think would look cool. They're not meant to be a huge, professional undertaking. Hopefully you can understand where I'm coming from.But since you brought it up, how do you think I could make the concept more harmonious? POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleuet Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 Ha ha, your traditionalist sentence made me laugh. Nothing wrong at all in posting what your imagination can create.That said, let say I am a mid tradition mid modern type.Your concepts are great, original, nice mix of tradition (shoulders) and modern.I would get the logo a bit smaller, dead center. Some black minor touches would make the red one an awesome third jersey. Rock'N'Roll! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 There's no point in doing something modern, creative or unique if it doesn't make the design better or if it doesn't act as part of a cohesive whole. This is the biggest point I feel you fail to understand with many of your concepts. There's a certain harmony that needs to be achieved in uniting a logo, design element(s) and the essential information that gives a uniform its function. This doesn't achieve any sort of visual harmony.I see your point, and if I was actually designing a new uniform for the Red Wings, I'd obsess over the tiny details that would make the design harmonious. But many of my concepts on here are spur-of-the moment ideas that I think would look cool. They're not meant to be a huge, professional undertaking. Hopefully you can understand where I'm coming from.But since you brought it up, how do you think I could make the concept more harmonious?Well, if I were looking at it, The first thing I know is that it's hockey, so the logo plays a bigger part than in football basketball or baseball. The first thing I notice is that the logo is flat, straight up, profile-view, etc. Very standard. It's also very round and fluid, but has some angular/radial structure and some fine linework in the spokes, and some more fine linework in the wing and tire, along with some bold linework here and there. It's also solid white and solid red. So, knowing this, I'm thinking that a combination of thick and thin white stripes would work well (because there are thick and thin strokes in the logo). Maybe Northwestern stripes (a thick white with two thin whites outside it), maybe Bills stripes (two thick whites in the center, two thin whites on the outside). Either way, I know I hate the plain thick white stripe they have on there now, so anything to jazz it up without getting too wild will work well here. Maybe alternating thick and thin down the whole sleeves?Because the logo is standard perspective and round, I think a rounded numeral similar to what the Chicago Bears use might look nice here. If it doesn't, the standard athletic block works well with just about anything, so that's the fall back plan.Other uniforms have much more complex color schemes and logos and require much more thinking and experimentation to achieve the balance, so this is a good example to quickly run down the process. There really are only so many places you can take a classic logo without it looking really tacky. You just have to know when you've gone too far. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawkeyHouse Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 Ew. Scratch that weird fading line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 not sure if its right for the red wings but i like the stripes. maybe if they faded on the edges outside of the numbers, or even behing the numbers it would be better GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 Looks like it would've been the design for the, say, Traverse City Red Wings of 1995-96 in some really low developmental league. In that sense, it's a good design, but not for Detroit. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.