AnythingChicago Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 Make the white script on the green uniform gold and USF if perfect.See below:I decided to keep the script white; when I tries gold it turned out to be too much gold. You'll just have to trust me on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 19, 2011 Author Share Posted April 19, 2011 Here's West Virginia. Yes, these are vests (even the navy blue one; it would be a vest with a navy undershirt opposed to one of a contrasting color.)And this is the last concept of the series, barring a huge increase in interest in this series all of the sudden. I'm gonna keep going. There has been a spark of interest, and I get bored sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 19, 2011 Author Share Posted April 19, 2011 Bump. Any C&C on the new concept? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Not a fan of the grey logos, but otherwise, a major improvement of the ones they actually have now.One suggestion I might have is to have a script logo on the Yellow alt, just for a change (which is what Alts are for anyhow, right?). And on a more out there idea which I'm not sure whether it'd work out or not, maybe try yellow pinstripes on the sleeves of the undershirts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Did you actually consider using WVU's baseball logo? They've got a different stylized "WV" that doesn't look wholly different than the Yankees' "NY." Just a suggestion.I do like the use of Athletic Gothic for the numerals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning25 Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Did you actually consider using WVU's baseball logo? They've got a different stylized "WV" that doesn't look wholly different than the Yankees' "NY." Just a suggestion.I do like the use of Athletic Gothic for the numerals. This logo looks better than their baseball one IMO.Also, I agree on the silver logos. Not enough contrast with the outline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 19, 2011 Author Share Posted April 19, 2011 Thanks for the comments. I'm going to change the gray logos (that was a failed experiment). I will also try a script on the yellow alt, although I'm not a huge fan of the West Virginia cursive script on the home site, but I will try it. I did consider the logo the baseball team uses now, but I don't like it as much. Do you guys think I could use that on one of the alts or as a sleeve patch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 The black numbers and letters on Cincinnati's red jerseys need a white outline. Numbers would be way too hard to read from a distance in real life.I think the WVU set is a downgrade from what they currently wear. The team's current interlocking WV is such a unique logo, suited for baseball. The number font you used makes it look beer-league softball-ish, IMO. I hate that font on basketball, football, baseball, anything, so don't take it personally. I think using the current font on the football unis would be a huge improvement, plus connects the brand, especially if you are going to use the main WV logo.And learn how to take constructive criticism. You get way too defensive and you kinda sound like a jackass sometimes. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DC in Da House w/o a Doubt Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Nice use of Joe Mazzulla, I woulda gone #5 White I've been asking for these for awhile and this is my school so I'm going to give alot of feedback here...I like the home white and the gray road uniforms (although I would add piping on the gray one)... not such a big fan of the bottom two though. I'd also consider using a different number font. Maybe either the current football or basketball numbers, just for giggles. For the alternates I would write out either Mountaineers or West Virginia. Maybe WVU. And make them not vests just to make 'em a little different. Also don't use the gray WV logo, I'm not feeling that one. Make one of the WV's gold and have a gold brim perhaps.I'm also a big fan of having a logo on the sleeve if you're going to wear a vest. Maybe consider using the Mountaineer statue logo. If you really wanna make it unique make him holding a bat rather than a rifle. Or maybe make a baseball version of this old school football logo hereBottomline, don't give up just because people aren't giving you tons of feedback. I'd like to see more of yours in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Yeah, I'd agree in avoiding the official cursive script if you can, but I still think some kind of script logo would be nice. And in reconsidering, maybe scrap the front numbers altogether. I don't mind the number font, but it does look a bit off on the front more I overlook it.And I simply don't like the interlocking WV. If there was a way to update it a bit, sure, but the way it is now is WAY old school in the bad way. It reminds me of the super old, Black Sox era ChiSox logo. If it could be updated in a way that the Sox logo was, it could be damn good, but yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 19, 2011 Author Share Posted April 19, 2011 I updated a few things above.The black numbers and letters on Cincinnati's red jerseys need a white outline. Numbers would be way too hard to read from a distance in real life.I think the WVU set is a downgrade from what they currently wear. The team's current interlocking WV is such a unique logo, suited for baseball. The number font you used makes it look beer-league softball-ish, IMO. I hate that font on basketball, football, baseball, anything, so don't take it personally. I think using the current font on the football unis would be a huge improvement, plus connects the brand, especially if you are going to use the main WV logo.And learn how to take constructive criticism. You get way too defensive and you kinda sound like a jackass sometimes.Thank you. I will take all of that into consideration. Do you know how I can incorporate the interlocking WV logo? I don't want it as a primary, but I'd like to incorporate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted April 20, 2011 Share Posted April 20, 2011 Is it me, or should the WV logo be on the left chest and the number on the right chest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 20, 2011 Author Share Posted April 20, 2011 Is it me, or should the WV logo be on the left chest and the number on the right chest?It's not just you. I tend to do that; it's a bad habit. 'Twas updated above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 20, 2011 Author Share Posted April 20, 2011 Huge update above. I incorporated the interlocking WVM logo on the sleeve of all jerseys and the hat of the Sunday alt. Hope this is an improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted April 20, 2011 Share Posted April 20, 2011 *cough*The sleeve logos are upside down. Otherwise, a nice touch though I think the sleeve logo should be left off the blue alt entirely. It looks strange that small splash of gold on the one sleeve with all the blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DC in Da House w/o a Doubt Posted April 20, 2011 Share Posted April 20, 2011 The WV's on the sleeves are all upside down.Nice updates though, much improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 20, 2011 Author Share Posted April 20, 2011 Alright, I'll get to that in the morning. Shouldn't take long.Any suggestions for the next concept? If not, I'll just start on Syracuse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted April 20, 2011 Share Posted April 20, 2011 The big update is really, really good. All 4 sets are solid. This might sound weird, but as much as I like the old-school WV logo and told you to keep it on there, I wouldn't be upset if you took it off. It's your concept, do what you want, and again, I like the updates. The gold alt really appeals to me. Good job, man. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 20, 2011 Author Share Posted April 20, 2011 The big update is really, really good. All 4 sets are solid. This might sound weird, but as much as I like the old-school WV logo and told you to keep it on there, I wouldn't be upset if you took it off. It's your concept, do what you want, and again, I like the updates. The gold alt really appeals to me. Good job, man.Thanks. And, actually, I'm coming to like the way that both logos are working in harmony. So the interlocking WV stays.Also, I turned the logos right side up. I will start working on Syracuse, then Marquette eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 20, 2011 Author Share Posted April 20, 2011 Here's 'Cuse. I'm still trying to decide on what I should do with the sleeve logo. I'm thinking...A. Block S.B. Interlocking SU.C. Orange dude.D. Dome logo.E. Nothing.Hope you all like it; I'm not trying to blow you away here, just dazzle you slightly. C&C appreciated as always; don't forget to give your opinions on what I should do for the sleeve patch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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