GDLions Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 I think the Blazers helmet is perfect!! As others have said the font is a no go. It needs to have a smooth flow to it like the logo does and not so many sharp angels. The only other thing is I would make the flames on the white pants and jersy red so it pops a bit more.So far this is awsome keep it coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 Glad you guys like the helmets:) Think I found the right font for the wordmark and jerseys, I tweaked the 'B' and 'L' to make little flames. And I also got rid of the 3rd outline around the pants/jersey flames. Mo' better??(up next: Dallas Outlaws) Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 definitely better THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I think the Wordmark is too tall. I would shorten it & I believe you may have a winner. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 Ask and ye shall receive:p Shortened the wordmark just a pinch. The Blazers were a lot of fun to make. Difficult to get a good wordmark, but fun nonetheless!Up next are the Dallas Outlaws. I couldn't resist giving the Texas team a stereotypical identity. I drew the logo first, and went with it.-I used the MLB Angels font on the wordmark and numbers, and I'm quite happy with how it turned out.-The barbed wire on the pants and helmet was a last minute addition, inspired by the Mean Machine from the remake of "The Longest Yard".I'm very tempted to go with black pants for both sets, but I know monochrome sets are a "no-no" in the uniform community:pHave at it, fellas! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDLions Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Dallas- The logo is fantastic, fits the team name, very clean not too much detail love it. I agree about the black pants, I think it would really make them look a little different from the steelers. My only problem is the colors. I would like to see the yellow changed to more of a saints gold or more steelers yellow, either one. It just looks a bit to olive colored. Also I would add a small yellow outline on the numbers between the orange and the number. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkg74 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Different is good, however I think I would ditch the olive pants and switch to the copper orange or black. Otherwise, great logo and the use of barb wire is genious.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 26, 2011 Author Share Posted July 26, 2011 Good lookin' out on the gold, guys. I didn't really realize how "green" it was!-I brought it up a bit, making it a bit brighter, and hopefully much less green-Made the barbed wire longer and thinner, and duplicated it on the helmet stripe. It looked too viny.Hope this looks a bit better!! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDLions Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 B-E-A-UTIFUL update on the Outlaws. I like the two barbed wire strips on the helmt better too.BTW I like the update on the Blazers way better too!!Cant wait to see the next team!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Great update on the Outlaws. I like the thinner barbed wire and the use of the double lines on the helmet. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 outlaws looked much better now with the update..the first color for the pants were just nasty looking lol THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 Thanks for the tips on the gold, to those who pointed it out! I suppose with time I'll develop a better eye for that sort of thing.Moving onward, we have the Hartford Tritons. I put this one up a couple weeks ago and it looked a bit different then. -I've shortened the trident prongs on the sides, so they don't look so even.-Added contrasting collars, which is a formula I'm pretty much adopting for all of the teams in the League.I've considered making a Royal blue, Kelly green and silver version of this set. Might throw it on here later on.Enjoy!!! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDLions Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 Hartford is great very simple but in a classic kinda way. I dont see any improvements that could be made.Royal blue, kelly green, and silver huh... someones a sucker for Whaler colors haha Really though it would be cool to see a faux back with a silver helmet and royal blue jersey with kelly green trim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 28, 2011 Author Share Posted July 28, 2011 Glad you liked it! I'll throw the alternate on here later on:)Here are the Las Vegas Invaders,This was one of the first teams I created. Having been fascinated with UFOs and aliens for most of my life, an alien-themed team was almost a must-have in the League. Enjoy! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkg74 Posted July 28, 2011 Share Posted July 28, 2011 You've got some serious skills, the fading stripes are a stroke of brilliance. Ka-ching!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDLions Posted July 30, 2011 Share Posted July 30, 2011 I really like the colors, its very under used but looks great. I think the number font is a bit over kill, not that its not cool but not quite realistic ya know. The logo is by far my least favorite, its just a bit simple and boring, although its done very well. I would kinda like to see a UFO flying with the fadding lines conect on the back of the helmet.Anyways its still a pretty concept and cant wait for the next team!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted July 30, 2011 Share Posted July 30, 2011 i really like the new layouts you chose to go with..the aliens logo is pretty cool..thought it was a turtle the first time i saw it tho THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 30, 2011 Author Share Posted July 30, 2011 i really like the new layouts you chose to go with..the aliens logo is pretty cool..thought it was a turtle the first time i saw it thoHahaha, That would be an AWESOME logo, though!! That's it! My expansion team will be the Snappers Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted July 30, 2011 Author Share Posted July 30, 2011 I would kinda like to see a UFO flying with the fadding lines conect on the back of the helmet.Great idea!I'm at the sketchpad right now, making a secondary logo. It's a bit tricky, because I want the UFO to be a sideview Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 31, 2011 Share Posted July 31, 2011 I like what you've done, but I have to agree on the numbers on this Invaders concept. It's a little overkill, and it detracts from the 'realness' of it IMO. Nice work otherwise! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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