GeauxColonels Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 I'd flip the logo on the crusaders helmet, helmet logos like tattoo's of people should never face backwards. The wordmark is uninspired. Seen in isolation it says nothing about Knights or Crusades and the silver keyline on it is way to thin to hold up at anything smaller than it appears on here so that could so with some serious work imo. I'm also interested as to why you chose blue? The cross of st george that the crusaders wore was red.I really like the logo but feel the amount of detail could be cut down, eg the number of air holes in the helmet. Try having less but making them bigger.9erssteveAll great feedback. I'll second the addition of red into the color scheme. It's probably the main color I would associate crusaders with. Also, I would also go with a less detailed helmet decal...maybe just a shield like someone mentioned. OR, create a secondary logo featuring a shield and sword together to use as the helmet logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevis Meseroll Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 NICE NICE styling on this set!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 20, 2011 Author Share Posted August 20, 2011 Sword/shield secondary in the works as we speak! Also using the red, silver, white scheme to be more historically accurate:PThis one was a doozie, but I won't let you guys down, haha. It'll look great! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 Great job. My favorite so far is the Lobos, but all of them are really good. Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 24, 2011 Author Share Posted August 24, 2011 Hey, fellas! Been a few days without internet, but after much wailing and gnashing of teeth, I'm back on!!Did a complete rebrand of New York, with the royal purple, red, grey color scheme I had originally.-Did away with the cross on the front of the jersey. Might re-render one in purple as an alternate.Thoughts? Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted August 24, 2011 Share Posted August 24, 2011 A very good update. Much better then the blue. The red cross on the shield immediately gives that connection to the crusades IMO. Also, I think the font is much improved as well. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted August 24, 2011 Share Posted August 24, 2011 much better..not even close THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justie Posted August 24, 2011 Share Posted August 24, 2011 much much much better. Great update Active TeamsWinnipeg Blue Bombers (1-2, T-1st, East Div.)Toronto Blue Jays (45-49, 5th in AL East Div. 8.5 GB of wildcard spot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted August 25, 2011 Share Posted August 25, 2011 Much better. The only thing I'd take another look at is extending the blade at the top, near the handle. Just to create some separation between the shield and sword handles. Other than that, great work. I love the pants stripes!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkg74 Posted August 25, 2011 Share Posted August 25, 2011 A great merger of the 2 ideas....impressive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 25, 2011 Author Share Posted August 25, 2011 (@missouritigers) Yeah, I was looking at that earlier. I might bring the angle of the swords down a bit to make the cross more 'horizontal', if that makes sense. That way, more blade would show above the shields, and it would prob. look better on the helmet.P.S. I took the color scheme from the USFL's Pittsburgh Maulers, haha! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woodsman Posted August 25, 2011 Share Posted August 25, 2011 Really good update man!! Everything is way better, but I agree with Missouri Tigers that the blade should be a extended a bit at the top of the shield but other than that it is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 26, 2011 Author Share Posted August 26, 2011 Started on a Revolution set last night. Got the updated Crusaders logo with the swords more wide-set. Will throw the rest on here later.Whatchu think? Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woodsman Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 Updated logo is fantastic man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 A very good update. Much better then the blue. The red cross on the shield immediately gives that connection to the crusades IMO. Also, I think the font is much improved as well. Nice job.It also has the Anglo-Saxon vibe, cause it resembles the English Flag. trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 27, 2011 Author Share Posted August 27, 2011 I'm really glad with how New York turned out!!I revamped Las Vegas today. I eliminated all the gradients, and added a molecule emblem to accompany the alien logo. And an "LV" monogram as a tertiary.Hopefully this is an improvement!Any thoughts before we move on to Orlando??? Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 27, 2011 Author Share Posted August 27, 2011 Oh, almost forgot!!!I also updated the Kodiaks. I got rid of the wordmark on the pants and helmet, and replaced them with a very basic pattern to pay homage to the Inuit culture in the Far North.Enjoy! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woodsman Posted August 27, 2011 Share Posted August 27, 2011 I like the updated Vegas set, looks a lot more professional.I like the stripe pattern for the Kodiaks but I thought the name on the pants was a nice touch. So for me new pattern on the helmet name on pants is a winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted August 27, 2011 Author Share Posted August 27, 2011 How about BOTH?? Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windstorm Posted August 28, 2011 Share Posted August 28, 2011 Wow, you've really come up with some great designs. They're all very professional and sleek. I especially like Las Vegas because the concept is unique without looking too over the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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