ImRobbieGreen Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 I joined the site last night and accidentally posted this twice in the wrong section. So sorry if it seemed like I was spamming, didn't mean to do that at all! So I deleted those and am posting here in the correct section.Anyways, this is a logo & jersey concept for the Tennessee Titans that I came up with. A lot of feedback that I've gotten from it so far is that it looks too much like a spartan/knight, it looks like Marvin The Martian, the sword looks like it's going through the head, too cartoony, ect. So I would like to know what you all think, along with any critiques you may have or if I should just overhaul it altogether.Any thoughts are appreciated, and sorry again if it looked like I was spamming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sport Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 Really good start on the logo. I would add another sword and have it mirror the first sword so the logo looks more balanced. The red part on the top of the helmet could use a line or two to define so it looks more dimensional. Right now it just looks flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FUNKAFIED Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 Wow, an italicized jersey number font that I don't hate. Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weemunk Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 Very nicely done. I agree with McCarthy's statement about adding a second sword so it looks like this: www.logos.fedffl.com | www.logos.fedffl.com/Misc-Logos.htm | www.logos.fedffl.com/Team_Signatures.htm | www.logos.fedffl.com/Championship_Banners.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImRobbieGreen Posted April 1, 2013 Author Share Posted April 1, 2013 I originally had it this way, but I thought it looked too similar to the Raiders logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 wow i love that. its just looks almost perfect. would like a wordmark on the primary logo though. and welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satansgoalie Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 Nice work on the logo man. I really like how the space in the face mask makes a T. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weemunk Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 I get that, it just seemed to be incomplete. I think this is cooler than the Raiders logo, which I love. www.logos.fedffl.com | www.logos.fedffl.com/Misc-Logos.htm | www.logos.fedffl.com/Team_Signatures.htm | www.logos.fedffl.com/Championship_Banners.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted April 2, 2013 Share Posted April 2, 2013 I gotta say, even though I'm partial to symmetry, I feel this logo is actually really well balanced without the second sword. I actually like the logo with just one sword. That being said, I'll have to echo what McCarthy said about making the logo a bit more dimensional. I'd add some accent lines here and there to keep it from looking flat. I'm not really feeling the jersey though, it just doesn't look like an NFL jersey to me (of course neither does the Titans current set).The alternate logo/sleeve patch just seems out of place with this set. The logo's very minimalistic while the primary is more detailed and fierce. Maybe you could create an alternate two crossed swords laying over a circular background with the three stars so you can still emulate Tennessee's flag.Really great work here, I'd love to see a full uniform set and I'm excited to see how this concept evolves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted April 2, 2013 Share Posted April 2, 2013 The eyes are giving it a super villain vibe. It looks like it could be a villain in He-man or something. It would look better without those two glowing eyes. Other than. that I would say thicken up the lines.I didn't even notice the T until satansgoalie mentioned it. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted April 2, 2013 Share Posted April 2, 2013 I like the two swords better than the one, but I really like that jersey and how you incorporated red into it. This is something that I feel the Titans could easily do without paying to much homage to the Houston Oilers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImRobbieGreen Posted April 2, 2013 Author Share Posted April 2, 2013 I've gotten a lot of mixed reviews about the jersey from a lot of people. A lot of people seem to favor basic jerseys ( Bears, Packers, Niners ) over new school designs ( Seahawks, Bengals, Vikings ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakexedge Posted April 11, 2013 Share Posted April 11, 2013 Dig the logo, and I don't think the Jersey is too shabby either. Try to mockup one with more of an "old school" vibe to it, just for the sake of seeing it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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