SplashBoogie Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 I like the Tampa Bay Rays fauxback uniforms and I decided to try and create a new logo around that idea. Dunno what else to say but ask what your thoughts are? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 I'm not sure if I should or not, but I love this. R logo is a tad hard to distinguish as an R, almost a P, but it's not bad. Nice work here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 I'm really liking this. Feels a little San Diego Chargers though. And I agree with kevsim1, the R is a little off. This has a lot of potential. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macalesterscots Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Agreed about the r. Also, the B is shaped a little awkwardly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Tampa Bay Pays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chilton92 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Nice job. But I agree with the others--the R is hard to make out. In fact, I can't tell whether it's supposed to be capital or lower-case. If it's the latter, raise the stem a little bit to where it doesn't look hidden behind the ray. Other than that, I really like it. http://www.manic-expression.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted February 23, 2014 Author Share Posted February 23, 2014 Thanks for the comments so far. I didn't even think about the R/P issue. I'll bug with it to see what I can't do to make it more clear.@Chilton: Yes the font itself is a lower case R (to match the 'ays') but the sunstar is supposed to interlock with it to make it look like a capital R.I will be honest I'm not sure where the R logo would go on really anything.@macalesterscots: What do you feel is awkward about the B? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 The "B" is fine, don't listen to them, they're just used to the perfect "B" they regularly use. If I'm correct, you meant it to look like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted February 23, 2014 Author Share Posted February 23, 2014 The "B" is fine, don't listen to them, they're just used to the perfect "B" they regularly use. If I'm correct, you meant it to look like that.Yeah I just wanted to see where they're coming from. The cap logo is what I felt best about. My main goal now is R/P.I guess secondary would be unChargering it but I think that's just gonna come with the territory of color choice and I like these colors.Also have some cap logos to consider Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 I like the one on the far right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvanBirchfield Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Tampa Bay Pays!!! ..Must be new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macalesterscots Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 @macalesterscots: What do you feel is awkward about the B?I just thought it looked strange being flat on top but rounded on the bottom. Also that the top half of the B is longer than the bottom half which gives the appearance of it being misshapen. But it's your concept, if that's the way you wanted it to look then you do you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 make the blue more Titans and less Panthers if you know what I mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Try fixing the 3rd logo as said above, it does look more like a P than a R. Also, I like the TB font you used, I would ignore the comments made above about changing the B. For color scheme, I like making the yellow a more major color. Definitely would add some uniqueness to the color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Changed the blue to 50% Titans Navy and 50% the Blue I used in the first place and changed the star's position to help eliminate the R/P issue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScoffingYayap Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 I would consider using a darker shade of blue, because it still looks like the Chargers colors. But, much improved look! My WorkFull MLB Concept (Plus Expos)The Modern Philadelphia Athletics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daniel75 Posted February 27, 2014 Share Posted February 27, 2014 Changed the blue to 50% Titans Navy and 50% the Blue I used in the first place and changed the star's position to help eliminate the R/P issueI like this one, the others not so much. I for one prefer their ray logo over they're silly little starburst thingy, its way more original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted March 6, 2014 Share Posted March 6, 2014 I'm not so sure how I feel about this. The newest script almost looks as if it were for some sort of cleaning product like Lysol or Windex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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