whchoclte Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Unlike Designs is proud to introduce the University of Lake Erie Commodores of the NCFA. GameCock82 contacted me about doing his identity package after he took over my team and moved them to Lake Erie.The Lake Erie Region is famous for the USS Nigara Flagship and its commander Commodore Oliver Perry. Both of these historical figures are represented within the identity package. Even the striping used is the same striping a commodore receives.The colors chosen were a Dark Teal (representing the ocean), Maize (representing the Commdore striping) and Silver.COPY & PASTELake Erie MainLake Erie SecondaryLake Erie UniformsAs always comments are welcome. I still have some tweaks to make on the hands and other areas, but all in all hope you guys enjoy.Greg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Outstanding! Take "Lake Erie" and the stripes off the secondary logo, and you have a near-perfect concept!Way to go whchoclte... good to see one of your designs again. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 And a half-hour later, Angelfire has seemingly killed your site. D'oh! Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ez Street Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 for some reason it's not working for me. Yes, i copied and pasted. @DavidStreeter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitroseed Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Angelfire = teh suck. Anyway, Greg, like I said on AIM... I'll host your stuff for you if you send it to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Yeah, and If you can't find Nitro, shoot them to me, I'll post them, too. NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi ΓΔΒ! Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whchoclte Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 Okay its reposted thanks to Nitro, Paynomind thanks for the offer.hope you guys enjoy - AGAIN.Greg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 those are fantastic, greg. Thank you so much. Dont change anything they are perfect. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ez Street Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Greg, those KICK ASS! Awesome work man! @DavidStreeter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Wow, what a fantastic set. I'm loving everything about this logo. This has an authentic college feel to it. It's amazing to see how much detail is in it. The amount of work you put in to it shows. Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Very nice...it was awesome to see this package come together, and be able to provide some suggestions at the same time.Excellent as per usual my friend. Like you said the hands still could use some tweaking, but other than that i think this is a fantastic concept, all the way around. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Wow. That's outstanding work.Only question is, what's that on the sleeves? Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whchoclte Posted June 30, 2004 Author Share Posted June 30, 2004 The striping on the sleeve is shown in the wordmark. Two lines with the top line forming the circle.It is striping the same striping a Commodore would get when instated.Hope this clears it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitroseed Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 You already know how I feel about it. Outstanding work, craftsmanship and effort! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 WOW! Phenomenal work! Your ship blows mine away (no battle pun intended).One thing though...at a small size, the logo on your helmet gets lost. With a light gray helmet, the yellow/gold on white gets lost. I'd either put a thicker blue outline around the logo, or maybe switch to a darker color. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 As someone who married into a family from Perry's boyhood home of Newport, RI, all I can say is... WOW! Outstanding work.Brian in Boston Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rozilla74 Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Fantastic! Very collegiate feel to them. Just sharp looking. Love the color choices as well. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
artvandelay Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Looks good. I think the secondary word mark is a little confusing. Not crazy about it. Tough to tell exactly what the letters are. Otherwise, great job. "...and you want to be my latex salesman." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avenger Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 Beautiful work... My only thought is that the helmet logo gets lost. Maybe a thicker outline or a colored helmet would fix that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 I lov eit.. very nice job.. i really like how he is about to whip out that sword and kick ass.My only suggestion would be the number font.. doesn't seem to "fit" to me.But VERY nice job! NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi ΓΔΒ! Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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