jaker52 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 It is 2043 and Fifa suddenly collapses leaving the world without its game. Riots break out in the streets and the World is generally heartbroken. One older man knows something must be done. he is known as Neymar. He starts a league of his own to give soccer back to the western world. He calls It the WWFA. (Western World Football Association. It starts as one simple league of 8 teams. In 2044, The first teams are revealed one by one. First of all is the league logoThe first new team will be given to Mexico city.c&c welcome this may end with anywhere between 8 and 80 teams MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 The first logo should not be on a black background. I personally am not a big fan of the league logo, and it looks a lot like your Illini concept wordmark. I like Mexico city except for the clip art ball. Add a clash/3rd kit. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 As said above, that looks a heck of a lot like the Illini wordmark you made. Furthermore, the top of the F doesn't line up, and I can't shake the feeling that there's a similar issue on the first W.I can't tell, but it doesn't look like the numbers are centered on the striped kit (I'm on my phone, so I haven't copied them into any program to check; these are first impressions, which are very important).The ball is clearly clipart.Some of the letters look closer to the circle than others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 The curve on the Mexico City and Football Club aren't equal to the likes of the roundel. Also the font in the word mark is really effing with my OCD. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Yeah as he points out the font in the Mexico City wordmark sucks. Also I don't see any way a league uses "A new era in football as their motto. It's good for the title, but not the league logo. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 The design is too basic. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Nothing is unique about Mexico City whatsoever. The colors (as far as I know) mean nothing, and the logo is as bland as a soccer crest as you can get. Maybe give it some area flare, and read a bit about Mexico City before just giving them a roundel with a boring font and a clip art soccer ball. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 18, 2014 Author Share Posted June 18, 2014 the colors are from the city crest but thanks to everyone Rio is next MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigGameBob Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 Now I kinda see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 the colors are from the city crest but thanks to everyone Rio is nextI hope you mean Rio is after you take our C+C and APPLY it. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 the colors are from the city crest but thanks to everyone Rio is nextI hope you mean Rio is after you take our C+C and APPLY it.Please do apply it, also add a sponsor for the team please. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 19, 2014 Author Share Posted June 19, 2014 Can you tell me how the crest is doing before i draw up kits? MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 It's better, but use different colors, maybe red and green Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 The arrows are titled too much. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 19, 2014 Author Share Posted June 19, 2014 new crest MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 The white looks pinkish to me, also the design inside to badge is WAY too complex. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 19, 2014 Author Share Posted June 19, 2014 its a pure white that one may be on you or the contrast by the red and thei made one with the pattern monochromed and it was much better MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 I would use more green, with red as a supporting color. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 19, 2014 Author Share Posted June 19, 2014 i changed color shades, added some strokes, and monochromed the patterm and i like thisern and i like this MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Agreed, MUCH better. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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