missouri tigers Posted November 2, 2011 Share Posted November 2, 2011 The last update is by far the best. It's the right combination of streamline and "fluffy" without being too much of either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted November 2, 2011 Share Posted November 2, 2011 In a way, I want you to keep working on it, because it just keeps getting better and better each time. But it looks fantastic as it is now. This would serve as a great logo for the Bears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TaylorGangorDie Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 and another round of tweaking... kinda tried to take everything and mix them together. That light orange still isn't working for me. Especially since it isn't incorporated anywhere else.To each his own; I think the light orange is needed and makes the bear look more realistic. Maybe if it filled in the whole snout, it would look even better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 It's small, but the change in the ear detailing makes it look a bit more canine than ursine.I think you are right about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 I am completely not seeing the dog ear... What is giving it that look and what can I do that would change it in your mind?I think I am nearing callin it finished and moving onto another one. Anything else to change or rework at all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 I'm not sure what it is exactly, and it may not just be the ear.The first image is clearly a bear. Very strong, immediately noticeable. The second image, the more that I looked at it, the more it starts looking like a mountain dog. I think the first image is close to perfect, just fill in the inside of the mouth with navy, replace the light orange with the other orange, and thicken the stroke around the teeth, like in the other one, and I think it's a winner. Sorry if I am being difficult. Just one guy's opinion. You certainly don't have to take my suggestions. Both are incredible logos, and you are very skilled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 dont mountain dogs have large floppy ears? maybe im thinking of something else.but i have no problem seeing this as a bear. if there needed to be a change, perhaps making the ear larger GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris86saw Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 I am completely not seeing the dog ear... What is giving it that look and what can I do that would change it in your mind?I think I am nearing callin it finished and moving onto another one. Anything else to change or rework at all?I love it! I will admit(not sure if this is a positive or negative comment yet) I find myself wanting to see more of the head (around the other side of the head a bit). Not sure if it would take away from the logo or not if the bear was facing out towards me a little more.Great Job though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 threw a brown color scheme on it just to see and i actually really like the way it looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 like those colors too but that blob of color on the side of the snout dosent do anything for it. its a distraction, because that color isnt carried through anywhere else, so you eye focuses on that spot. it dosent look anything like highlights or fur, just a blob of color making it all worse. GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 I say keep the original colors, those were better than the bright orange only. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 If the lighter orange or tan were used as the outline, instead of white, I think that might help the issue. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 If the lighter orange or tan were used as the outline, instead of white, I think that might help the issue.Oh i like that suggestion! I will try that out and see how it looks. This right here is the reason why I like this site... something so simple and small but something that all the time I have been staring at it didn't think of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 took the idea for the 3rd color as outline... i really like it so gonna move on from this logo. also for fun threw a couple other teams color schemes on there that use the bears as a mascot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 Wow. This is great JJ. If you're still trying to figure out the ear thing, perhaps try moving the ear toward the top of the head a little bit. I'm really loving the Baylor color scheme version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StillS Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 If you are going to keep the colour part around the nose then the latest brown version is the best. The whole thing kind of blends together well. But I quiet like colours of the yellow outline one (3rd) but yellow around the nose is a little distracting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 thanks. i may go back and play with the ear a bit more. the baylor color scheme may be my favorite of these which is kinda funny cause green is my least favorite color ever! haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 thanks. i may go back and play with the ear a bit more. the baylor color scheme may be my favorite of these which is kinda funny cause green is my least favorite color ever! hahaHaha, I know what you mean... too bad they'll be quaking in their boots at the sight of Mr. McBeary... err, McGary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 This is awesome! Really great job, I actually like it in the brown or more natural color scheme. Awesome. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 took the idea for the 3rd color as outline... i really like it so gonna move on from this logo. also for fun threw a couple other teams color schemes on there that use the bears as a mascot.I think this is it! The lighter color stroke helps unify the use of the color, and using it in the inner ear helps signify that area better. Beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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