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Soccer Crest Concept - Looking for some C&C (updated 1/14)


randyc

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Hey everyone,

I decided to try my hand at creating a soccer crest for my soon-to-be La Liga fantasy team. The team is based out of Lisbon, Portugal and will play under the name Grande Lisboa C.F. or Grande Lisboa Clube de Futebol (not sure if the name is correct but that's what I got in the english to portuguese translator).

I based the crest off of this picture of Marques de Pombal Square in Lisbon, and the flag of Lisbon. The colours are based off of the flag also.

I came up with a few different versions of the direction I went in. Personally, I'm leaning towards version without a cross and 2015 at the bottom.

Any C&C on this would be great!

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I'd agree with the above comments - if you opt for one of the versions with the cross though, I'd see about keeping the gyronny in the top two quarters only. It looks a bit odd to me poking down from behind the cross.

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Not sure if he meant that or to increase the gray area between the green and inner designs.

I'm not so sure you need the white strokes on the text though.

^^ This. I meant more gray space around the roundel.

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I'll be honest: This looks like a mashup with very little coherency. None of the pieces really fit together. The gray doesn't work with any of the other colors; the separated ring is a cool idea, but doesn't really translate well; and the font doesn't mesh well with otherwise old-style elements.

I'm not sure how to fix any of that without reconsidering the concept entirely.

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