DawgPacPBH Posted August 19, 2004 Author Share Posted August 19, 2004 bump bump bump bump it up. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesCraven Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 "Riiiiiiiiight."-Dr. Doug Evil.Anyone wanna consult Pete Rose or Jeremy Roenick? "I better go take a long walk off a short pier or something."Some people on this bolard have told me to do just that.My "Ron Mexico" alias is "Jon Tobago". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 The poker chip rocks but see how it looks with more strips! That's a winner. Now I think the text need a little tweaking. Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 19, 2004 Author Share Posted August 19, 2004 The poker chip rocks but see how it looks with more strips! That's a winner. Now I think the text need a little tweaking. yeah, im still learning how to make some good wordmarks and getting some good foonts peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 19, 2004 Author Share Posted August 19, 2004 new wordmark peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KJTALBOT Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 I like what you've done so far.Why don't you try a wordmark that looks like Neon. Everyone loves a roundel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 I like what you've done so far.Why don't you try a wordmark that looks like Neon. Excellent idea? Or how about the famous "Welcome to Las Vegas" sign? Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 That's a great idea - you could either do a simple wordmark like the sign has surrounded by a border shaped like the sign, or you could put "GAMBLERS" in the simple font and "Las Vegas" in that "Fabulous" font.Either way, I think there's a lot to do with this. As for sport, I'd say Baseball. The 51s won't keep selling merchandise forever, and the team'll be looking for a new identity soon. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoneranger Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 Very nice, but while we're critiquing......the star on the chip kind of throws me off. Maybe more points on the star like a starburst (see Welcome to Las Vegas Sign above). Also, I'd be careful leaving this up without some kind of protection (watermarking, etc.) because, and don't take this the wrong way, it's meant as a compliment, it's good enough for a logo pirate to steal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 I say keep the star the way it is. I can clearly see that it's a star and I don't think it's thrown anyone else off. Keep the chip the way it is but make your black outlining more believable when you take a closer look at it. From there all you have left is the text that looks sort of similar to the sign. If think if you did all of that you would have a awesome logo! Great job so far man. Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 19, 2004 Author Share Posted August 19, 2004 thanks guys ill take them down and watermark it and put up a new one soon. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 20, 2004 Author Share Posted August 20, 2004 okay i spent some good time on this. i love it, what do you guys think? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLChandler Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 Love the new wordmark DawgPac, you got yourself a solid logo here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primal Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 One thing on the chip - you need to work on the perspective a bit more. There should be a short edge (thickness of the chip) between the tops of the two circles and another between the bases... not just one circle on top of another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 I may be just be being picky here but I think you should put the white stripes going down the side because pretty much all poker chips used in casinos or what have you have the stripes going down the side, too.it looks great either way, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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DawgPacPBH Posted August 20, 2004 Author Share Posted August 20, 2004 thanks guys. ill be out for the weekend, so i wont be able to fix anything. but keep the C&C Coming so i can fix everything. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 I think it looks great but it also looks like two separate logos. I think you need to incorporate the chip into the sign somehow. Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 21, 2004 Author Share Posted August 21, 2004 I think it looks great but it also looks like two separate logos. I think you need to incorporate the chip into the sign somehow. idk man, the lights make it kinda busy as is. so i think i will just keep them as two logos, and the one will be a wordmark as well...maybe...idk. my brain hurts. i dont have illustrator for a few days so i cant work on it. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 Getting better. Except now the sign looks more like another logo than a wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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