glazebal Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 Just curious what you guys think, also which one of these wordmarks looks better with the design.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 Nice--the logo does look like it comes out at you--good depth--which sport(s) is this for?THis would certainly suit some sports bettr--for example it would look great on a hockey jersey--but may have too much detail for a football helmet-meaning you could use this as the primary--but lose some detail for the helmet.The second wordmark is much better--I take the first one to have rivets or something like that--but it just looks like a poor colouring job... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 Wow that's really nice!!! I like the font w/o the dots, 2nd logo looks clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J77 Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 Just curious what you guys think, also which one of these wordmarks looks better with the design.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I think the first wordmark works best with tho logo. I am assuming those dots are supposed to represent rivets or screws (if not, sorry, just my interpretation), and that style fits well, in my opinion, with the "mechanical" theme of the train. Awesome look though.Also, if i could make ONE suggestion, and its simply asthetic, tone down the transparency level of your watermark, its causing a bit of confusion on ur artwork.~UJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted February 6, 2005 Share Posted February 6, 2005 1st wordmark looks best I.M.O. good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 ...may have too much detail for a football helmet-meaning you could use this as the primary--but lose some detail for the helmet.... If two mirror image stickers of just the train part were used on a helmet, with the rear of the trains meeting in the back (like the old Seahawks, but on an angle) it would look pretty sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac the Knife Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 2nd. The rivets detract from the overall look IMHO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 Not often I get to move a thread from the Requests forum to the Sports Logos forum... it's a cool feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 I think the train is too detailed. I think the font is a bit ordinary. I can't really suggest how I would improve this, other than doing something different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 I think the font should be more angular and aggressive and modern for a name like DIESEL. Similarly, i think the train is too ornate. Simplification would do this logo good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cashcleaner Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 Actually, I don't really mind the DIESEL font, but I'll agree it looks miles better without the rivets.For the train itself, it could do with a bit less....ummm.....stuff. There is a lot of detail there, maybe a little less would give it a more streamlined look, perhaps?As a final note, the purple you used is quite nice, but a tad dark. Maybe try lightening it up a bit to better contrast from the black.Looking pretty good, though. I likes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 The second one looks better, but the overall logo is a bit too detailed to be used in a uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glazebal Posted February 8, 2005 Author Share Posted February 8, 2005 I created a different logo for the helmets, I will try to post it ASAP. I am working on a few other things quick though. Thanks for the comments guys, I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the admiral Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 What if the bottom line was flat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hrivnak Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 I think the train is too detailed and I don't care for the positioning of the "Southern Tier" lettering. It screws with the perspective of the train too much, in my opinion. I would try putting the "Southern Tier" on top of or below the "Diesel."Other than that, excellent work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDonovan Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 the font should follow the dirrect or the depth of the train Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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