irondudez Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 well, i took everyone's advice to improve my Sharks logoset, and I gotta say, Its alot of an improvement.. I tried to make it look my like a shark rather than a dolphin, i changed the wordmark, and the eyes in the shark (i wasnt feeling the other ones)...C&C is welcome!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Not bad at all... however, for future reference, try to post updates in the original thread, as one member of the boards notoriously made 15 threads for the same thing and isn't very well liked around here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonoMan Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Very nice, just a few things that catch my eye, the gills look a little out of place. The same with the teeth. I feel the whole logo is very clean except these two areas. I would love to see another blue used except the SJ. Looks great. I suffer from a very sexy learning disability..... sexlexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randyc Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 i like this wordmark better than the 1st versions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 however, for future reference, try to post updates in the original thread, as one member of the boards notoriously made 15 threads for the same thing and isn't very well liked around here. oh, my bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFoA Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Yes, this is much better than Sharks Orlando I like it, nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 i like the use of negative space in the wordmark for the shark fin...great job - the shark itself is a bit cartoony for my taste, but very good - you might want to alter the tail a bit - the top portion should be larger than the bottom portion, and curved sharply - this tail looks like a vertical dolphin fin to me - great work, though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Wordmark is much better than the last. I like this shark better too. Small detail - but maybe make the teeth pointy instead of flat - like I say, small small detail. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yankeeman Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Big improvement....the shark looks much more fierce.Like someone else mentioned, I like the use of the fin in the wordmark...especially between the "r" and the "k". It nicely fills in the gap that would have been there otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 allright, I started this Sharks Logo Set COMPLETELY from scratch, so i could take away some of the cartoon feel, and also make it look a lot more like a shark... This is what i came up with: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Awesome now....but what exactly is it for. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 Awesome now....but what exactly is it for. not for anything really... This was the first time i've ever created a logo though BTW, i working on giving it teeth now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 11, 2005 Author Share Posted April 11, 2005 ok, here is what i believe to be my final version of this logo set. I gave the teeth more detail and cleaned up the wordmark: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 The design has come a long way, but I don't think you can leave that white space between the teeth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonoMan Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Daddy likes....Look awsome. I suffer from a very sexy learning disability..... sexlexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Yes--darken in the space between the teeth, and you have a winner--the body is much more shark-like now... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alphabet Man Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 ok, here is what i believe to be my final version of this logo set. I gave the teeth more detail and cleaned up the wordmark: that looks quite good.... yeah as stampman said, draken the area between the teeth and it would be perfect...perfect good work twitter.com/thebrainofMatt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nafsder2003 Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 ok, here is what i believe to be my final version of this logo set. I gave the teeth more detail and cleaned up the wordmark: Wow, great improvement. A few suggestions; as others said, put another color, probably black, in between the teeth. I'd also inch the dorsal fin up just a little bit...it is just a little bit too far to the left right now. With the negative space fin that I suggested earlier under the R, I'd make it just a tiny bit thicker, and possibley facing the other way to follow the "curve" (yes...I know, there isn't actually a curve on the r) that is normaly present in a lowercase r. In fact, maybe change the lower case r to exhibit that curve.Those are just minor ajustements that I think would make it even better, but as it stands now, it is great. Now let's see some uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFoA Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 ok, here is what i believe to be my final version of this logo set. I gave the teeth more detail and cleaned up the wordmark: Well, you've hit the nail with the hammer on this one. The wordmark was nice, all you needed was to make it look more like a shark, and you accomplished that. Excellent work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irondudez Posted April 12, 2005 Author Share Posted April 12, 2005 heres the logo w/ a black mouth: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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