rtrich11 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Haven't posted a concept in a while, so here goes. I wanted to try something with more of an impactful image than the full-winged Hawk they use now. I also wanted to use subtle influences from their logo and uniform history, but do it in a modern way. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aryehz99 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 try a yellow alternate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurricaneDavid Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Is that a custom font? If so, why is the left part of the W lower? It looks unnecessarily weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Ship Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Nice...i like it.But i'm not sure about the away one. Maybe filling of white the main stripe it could looks better. I'm with HurricanDavid about that weird "W". My PicturesMy Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted November 14, 2005 Author Share Posted November 14, 2005 I tried the away jersey with the white stripe across the chest and it did look ok, but I dunno. Maybe it looked just too much like the early 80s unis. Minus the weird angles, of course.Ahh, the W. I customized the font a little bit, and believe me, it looks better than it did normally. Not that one should ever stop working just because "hey, it's better." I kinda like the W as it adds interest. Maybe by the end of this I'll hate it. Who knows.And for a yellow alt, I doubt if I'd make one just because I'm trying to minimize the yellow in this set. Just use it for accents, etc. Thanks. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hitman1jgl Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Nice try. I am not completely against. I just never liked the Stripe Acrossed the Chest. Might as well bring back The Human Highlight Film." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnWis97 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 I like the the logo--alot. This would have been a great update to the 'Nique era logo. Disclaimer: If this comment is about an NBA uniform from 2017-2018 or later, do not constitute a lack of acknowledgement of the corporate logo to mean anything other than "the corporate logo is terrible and makes the uniform significantly worse." Â BADGERS TWINS VIKINGS TIMBERWOLVES WILD POTD (Shared) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 I like the the logo--alot. This would have been a great update to the 'Nique era logo. agreed. i LOVE this concept.it looks very atlanta hawks. great job, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uniguy22 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Very well done. It gives a nice mix of the past with a modern feel. I'm not sure of the alternate jersey though. The w in hawks looks a little awkward also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Fantastic job, especially on the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wingz017 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Sheer perfection except for the stripe on the front and back of the pants, looks out of place on the front of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 one thing bothers me about the logo. On the underside of his head, its white, and that carries over to the edge of the logo, opening up, etc. To me, its too plain, too much white. It gets lost. I think some kind of subtle shading would help. Cool concept! @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natsfan36 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 i like it a lot!!! I just wanna do hoodrat things with my friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilaLogos Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 I love the wordmark and the updated logo is solid. They jersey design, while I understand is a nod to the past, is just a bit too 80's for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted November 15, 2005 Author Share Posted November 15, 2005 Thanks a lot, guys! cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 And for a yellow alt, I doubt if I'd make one just because I'm trying to minimize the yellow in this set. Just use it for accents, etc. You may have minimized the yellow too much. Some of the designs - the black ones especially - look too much like a Portland Trailblazers set. The Hawks make great use of red and yellow, which are unique since the Rockets abandoned these colors. I'd sooner use yellow than all that black - the Bulls and Blazers already do red and black, and teams like the 76ers use those colors heavily as well.I like the tribute to the '80s as well. It's lost a little bit on the red set, since the lettering is on a red band on a red jersey. And that font, plus that band across the chest, reminds me more of '80s Pacers than Hawks, which had a serifed font and the band was angled. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 I dig....Kick @$$ jersys though.....I'd buy one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rynoz10 Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 Not bad, I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 I like the font. The hawk seems a bit unpolished and the yellow used is a bit flat for my liking. I think the drop shadow in the wordmark should be carried over to the uniforms. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted November 15, 2005 Author Share Posted November 15, 2005 ...I think the drop shadow in the wordmark should be carried over to the uniforms.I use the dropshadow + yellow in the numbers. On the Alternate, the shadow has red. I really thought about using it in the "Hawks" and "Atlanta" on the front, but decided that it made things too busy or intricate for lettering that is really only a few inches tall. But yes, I did try it. I went for "less is more". cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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