AAO Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Particularly, I wanted a color scheme not found in the NBA as of yet. We've seen blue and orange--but never dark teal and orange, along with a greenish grey. The C tertiary mark, i'm not too fond of yet, I need it to look more like an actual bobcat paw scratching. EDIT/UPDATE: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 The whiskers against the gray stick out too much. They should be swept back more. The ears should have tuffs of hair sticking out. The C secondary is a miss IMO. I like the colors, although I'd have to see how they are used on the uniforms. I could see scratches through the C instead.To me, the jury is out. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 The head is a solid start. It has great flow and energy. It has some bobcat characteristics, though it could use a few more to truly get the idea across. The wordark is okay. The kerning is off, and the letterforms need some individual attention. (The "T" needs to be wider at the top). The cat on the wordmark though, needs some work. It looks like it's wearing a barbershop cloak. It needs more orange, for one, and for two, its just a few curved lines to define the entire body of a wild cat. Get some aggressive shoulders or paws in there, some jagged fur, some, anything. The tail looks very strange ond out of place as well. It all just kind of looks unfinished except for the head. Good points also are the way-too-thick grey outline around the whiskers and the absence of those bobcat characteristics, like the ear tufts. Bottom teeth are rarely larger than top teeth. The tongue looks really flat. The head needs some work after all. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted November 14, 2005 Author Share Posted November 14, 2005 Some good crit there. I do see the 'barbershop cloak' effect in the primary. Ill update soon. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingssss Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 The head is a solid start. It has great flow and energy. It has some bobcat characteristics, though it could use a few more to truly get the idea across. The wordark is okay. The kerning is off, and the letterforms need some individual attention. (The "T" needs to be wider at the top). The cat on the wordmark though, needs some work. It looks like it's wearing a barbershop cloak. It needs more orange, for one, and for two, its just a few curved lines to define the entire body of a wild cat. Get some aggressive shoulders or paws in there, some jagged fur, some, anything. The tail looks very strange ond out of place as well. It all just kind of looks unfinished except for the head. Good points also are the way-too-thick grey outline around the whiskers and the absence of those bobcat characteristics, like the ear tufts. Bottom teeth are rarely larger than top teeth. The tongue looks really flat. The head needs some work after all. Ditto. And just to add to that, to me, that C logo with the paw on it sort of looks like the C has a Santa Clause-looking hat on it. That needs to look more like an actual paw.I really do like the idea, I just think it needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted November 14, 2005 Author Share Posted November 14, 2005 Update....Depth to the tongue, adjusted teeth, ear tufts, adjusted whiskers, kerned letters correctly, adjusted body, and different tertiary: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 it looks like the right side of the cat's face doesn't exist- try fleshing it out a bit more or adding the fur that would jut out on that side kind of like this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted November 14, 2005 Author Share Posted November 14, 2005 Good catch gordie. Heres an edit: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starchild Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 I'm not too fond of this as is, AAO. To me, it looks less like a Bobcat and more like a pissed off house cat.As for the wordmark, it gives me a more collegiate sense than an NBA franchise. And the fact that half of the Bobcat is covered by the wordmark is sort of annoying... the Bobcat needs to be the focus, not the wordmark. As it is, I see "CHARLOTTE BOBCATS" first, and then I see half of an animal.Perhaps also change the pose of the cat... right now, even if you made it look like an angry Bobcat, it looks like its blown away by wind... perhaps making the cat moving forward as opposed to backward would help in making it appear more aggressive. "The true New Yorker secretly believes that anyone living anywhere else has got to be, in some sense, kidding." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 VERY solid work as usual. Better perspective of the bobcat unlike their current logo. Perfect colors too. Also, you might want to try a full body bobcat without the wordmark, just wondering what it would look like if you tried it. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee. Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 The cat in question still doesn't look like a bobcat...looks an awful lot like your Detroit Tiger "resdesign"...check gordie's cat for inspiration.Try to make him look like he's ready to attack, not calling somebody a deusche (sic) over his shoulder.Take from this what you will. Welcome to DrunjFlix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Do bobcats even have long tails? I am wondering if they are called bobcats because it looks like they have a "bobbed" tail. The weirdness in the face is probably because you have two angles going on at once. The eyes and nose+mouth are one angle, the furry outline is at another. That's why the face looks concave. To fix, add some of that cheek fur (what else would you call it?) on the left side, going past his nose. Then you can connect the ear and the whole thing won't be concave anymore. Make any sense? cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buckeyes1 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Maybe switch the text around. Put Charolotte where it says Bobcats and put Bobcats where it says Charolotte. Try it that way, I think it will look much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxweb81 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Like the logo idea. Do u think u can make jersey's too(please). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Do bobcats even have long tails? I am wondering if they are called bobcats because it looks like they have a "bobbed" tail. Ah, you're right. They don't have long tails, but that can be fixed easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tajmccall Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 Its stylized nicely, but the transition to the jaw on the right looks fat. I would render that a bit more and you would have a winner.Please make jerseys that dont resemble stain-glassed windows if you are going to re-do those too Store 1 Store 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natsfan36 Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 i like what you have done, and that is step in a good direction...however, the face just does not look right...and i believe you are right, the tail is short, like a rabbits I just wanna do hoodrat things with my friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted November 15, 2005 Author Share Posted November 15, 2005 Actually, doesn't that tail look long? The angle it's at doesn't show the entire tail, just the tips. It looks like its curling up, like it's maybe a good foot long or so. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 Yeah, this is a good start, but you should really emphasize the shape of the face. The the photograph above this post. Play up that distinctive "bobcat" face. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted November 15, 2005 Share Posted November 15, 2005 Your tail looks to be about twice as long as a normal bobcat tail. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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