Los Angeles Angels Concept

[AngelsFan5]

Hey, I have been saving this for my first post. I like the colors and the logo the Angels have now, but I don't really like how the away jerseys say "Angels". So I just tried to do something mildy different.

C&C welcome (made with MSPaint)

[~boshalladay~]

Looks good but I would appriciate an image a bit larger, the only thing is that hat looks strange and I think thats too much blue, personally I like the Angels how they are thank you. Very good for a first concept

(out of 5)

[Eye]

It's not bad at all. I think that the Angels would want to stay away from blue, because one of their division rivals (Texas) wears blue. The names on the back are too long. They shouldn't run onto the sleeves like that. Use a smaller font size for the name. Other than that it's pretty good.

[AceHawk447]

Also, the LA Dodgers have blue as primary.

[Hat Boy]

Meh. It looks pretty generic. Like something you would see a fake team wear in a TV show or movie.

[ninersdd]

Can you zoom in on the hat please

[Dark Angel]

Hey, I have been saving this for my first post. I like the colors and the logo the Angels have now, but I don't really like how the away jerseys say "Angels". So I just tried to do something mildy different.

C&C welcome (made with MSPaint)

Don't tell me that Nintendo bought the Angels today

[LMU]

It looks really star-trekky. Not something the Singing Cowboy would have condoned.

[BrianVlietDesign]

Hey, I have been saving this for my first post. I like the colors and the logo the Angels have now, but I don't really like how the away jerseys say "Angels". So I just tried to do something mildy different.

C&C welcome (made with MSPaint)

The text is not very "Angels" to me. Neither is that shade of blue.

[baseballking99]

From what I can see it's a nice try but the current Angels set is too good to be beat

[VitaminD]

Hmm... nope, not feelin' it. And it has nothing to do with how excellent the Angels' current set is.

Suggestions:

1. Arch the text. Very few teams use wordmarks that are completely horizontal. Most arch or arc the text, or slant it in a straight line. "LOS ANGELES" is a lot of letters to just run straight across like that.

2. Choose a better font. It's too horizontally-compressed. Based on the picture, "GUERRERO" extends down onto the sleeves. And it's only 8 letters long; how would you manage Garciaparra or Saltalamacchia? Likewise, the "LOS ANGELES" runs into the armpits and wouldn't be able to be seen if the jersey were being worn. And the numbers are too squat, leaving vast areas of blank jersey.

3. Go with a less techno-futuristic theme. This looks like LA Angels circa 2050, after the team moves to our colony on the Moon. The Angels have had a few good looks in their day, but this does nothing for them.

4. Choose colors wisely. LA's "other team", the Dodgers, wear royal blue and are associated the world over with that color. Why would the Angels also make that color their principal color?

5. Details matter. The halo on your cap sits in front of the "A", or so it appears (small picture, hard to tell). The halo ought to be partially obscured by the letter it's supposed to be atop. (And before you say it, MSPaint is not an excuse...)