See Red Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 It became messed up during the uploading process... but still...Comments welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puckguy14 Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 I like it! Although, maybe another color to give it, well, color. 2004 San Jose Sharks 7th Man Fan of the Year San Jose Gold Miners - 4x Lombardi Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 Hey InTheEnd88, I love the design! I loved it so much that I tinkered around with it! I just thought it needed to look a little meaner, it looked a little like a Pokeman. I hope you like what I have done and it's merely just ideas that I threw on there. http://www.sportslogos.freehomepage.com/images/wolflogo.gifI also tried to add color into the black portion of it. I saw you also tried to do the same in several spots. It just didnt seem to work out from when I messed around with it. So I just left the fur part black. Comments? I really do love your logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 It's pretty close to the Lycans concept recently posted--not calling it a rip off, just saying it's close. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted January 24, 2004 Author Share Posted January 24, 2004 I like it Steve-O. I couldn't get the teeth like that to look good though so that's why the teeth are similar to those of Nitroseeds, I was inspired by those. lol. And when I saw his posted, I was worried cuz' the colors are way similar and had changed them for a while, but couldn't get it to look good with any other colors.edit: What I mean by that, since the logo is a little colorless... i was referring to the jerseys I had made up. The greenish-gray I used is a significant part of the uniform and color scheme together as is the moon color. The only other dark color I thought to use that could work was Purple and Purple didn't go with the other colors. So that's why I kept the scheme.Also... before until I uploaded... the all black of the fur is actually supposed to be a very very dark gray, with black lines in it to add definition, sort of. But then it all turned black... which I actually kinda like more than how it was... so... without further ado, here's the uniforms...Any comments on the uniforms? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cward Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 All right, I dont want to sound totally critical. First off, the color scheme and unis look sweet and work well with the nickname. Even the logo concept is cool, except the actual logo drawn. Try re-doing the wolf to look a little more realistic., cause the way it is comes across as a little freaky. Try tweaking it more and see what you get. Maybe add a couple more wolves to represent a "pack". www.skyedesignstudios.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zer0dotcom Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 I'd put the moon on the helmet as well. The wolfpack wordmark looks good, too bad it doesn't fit too well on the uniform anywhere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 This trully is a nice logo, would look good on a real NFL team. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gosioux76 Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 I like the entire concept, especially the colors. The logo, if memory serves, seem similar in shape to that of the San Jose SabreCats. I wonder what it would look like if you made the logo much larger, similar to the SabreCats' helmets.Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 This really is an awesome logo. I think it might need another accent logo on the Wolf head though. Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rozilla74 Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 I like the concept behind the logo. The moon is a a nice touch but is too far to the right for my tastes. It creates an odd overall shape to the logo. With some tweaking here an there on the eyes and line weights, it'll look truly great. I like the color choices a lot.To get the sense of a wolfpack, I'd echo the sentiments of Cward. Add some smaller silouettes of other wolf heads. I did something similar with a Crimson Herd logo I did for the NMSU contest.You chose a nice font for the wordmark. My only complaint is the negative space created inbetween the L, F and P. It throws the whole wordmark off when I look at it at first glance. i would eliminate those areas altogether and allow the gray to fill it out.One question for you, I've been seeing a few threads for MLF expansion logos. Excuse me for my ignorance/stupidity but what exactly is the MLF? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted January 30, 2004 Author Share Posted January 30, 2004 MLF is one of the fantasy football leagues on the Chris Creamer network.I have since retracted my proposal for the MLF in having been named as a charter franchise for the PFA. I have also changed from the Minnesota Wolfpack to the Las Vegas Wolfpack, and have since added an alternate logo which is similar (very) to that that the Las Vegas Outlaws of the XFL wore.Now, here's a remake of the jerseys with that as a sleeve logo...And I have also proposed to host the Championship game, and have proposed this as the logo if Las Vegas gets picked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cward Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 Again, I think tweaking the logo around would totally improve the overall logo. The alternate's sweet, although originality is always best. www.skyedesignstudios.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted January 31, 2004 Share Posted January 31, 2004 The logos are in need of touching, and probably lightening up. The jerseys are nice. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted January 31, 2004 Share Posted January 31, 2004 I like the LV alternate logo. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted January 31, 2004 Author Share Posted January 31, 2004 Here is a revamped version of the logo. Although it just reeks of similarity to Nitroseeds, not by design though. I'm looking for some help as to how to seperate it from his concept. Also, I can't really get any more definition I attempt to put on correctly, so if anyone could help with that, it'd rock.New Wolfpack logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted January 31, 2004 Share Posted January 31, 2004 I prefer your original design.Brian in Boston Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rozilla74 Posted January 31, 2004 Share Posted January 31, 2004 If I have time to play, maybe I'll tweak things for ya. If you don't mind. I really like the concept with the moon. You aren't quite there yet but the unis look great. I also like what you have going with the Rozelle LV logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 31, 2004 Share Posted January 31, 2004 first of, i really like the unis and the Rozelle bowl proposal, very nice. The logo still seems to be missing something. I think you're headed in the wrong direction with the second version. If i think of something great to fix this up, I'll give it a go, or else just suggest it here, but im not at that point yet :: GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted January 31, 2004 Share Posted January 31, 2004 Definitely going the wrong way. In fact, I'd be as bold as to say the original needs no tweaking whatsoever--I think it's a great package. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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