HotCoffey Posted April 27, 2009 Share Posted April 27, 2009 no raysox, teal is the identity of the marlins. they have won 2 titles with it. dont dump it for that orange update. while i welcome an attempt to bring some orange into the logo, dont get rid of the teal altogether "That ball has a hit in it, so I want it to get back in the ball bag and goof around with the other balls in there. Maybe it'll learn some sense and come out as a pop-up next time," Mark "The Bird" Fidrych Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted April 27, 2009 Share Posted April 27, 2009 no raysox, teal is the identity of the marlins. they have won 2 titles with it. dont dump it for that orange update. while i welcome an attempt to bring some orange into the logo, dont get rid of the teal altogetherUm there is more teal in his concept than they use now, and orange is only used on the seams of the baseball. If you are refering to the "new" cap logo, he was making fun of patsox because he made that logo. Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted April 28, 2009 Share Posted April 28, 2009 The problem with the Braves set is that the tomahawk in the A totally obscures the T and L in "Atlanta." Also, the problem with a Georgia logo for the Braves is that they're not just a Georgia team, they're a Southeastern U.S. team. You could represent that with a logo that would look a lot like the old Plains-covering logo of the Kansas City Chiefs.I like that you made a Miami script, but I still hate the existing Marlins package. For a team based in a sweltering grotto of fun like Miami, the Marlins' visual identity is lifeless, sterile, and depressing, though these happen to be the same adjectives used to describe the Florida Marlins organization itself. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HotCoffey Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 no raysox, teal is the identity of the marlins. they have won 2 titles with it. dont dump it for that orange update. while i welcome an attempt to bring some orange into the logo, dont get rid of the teal altogetherUm there is more teal in his concept than they use now, and orange is only used on the seams of the baseball. If you are refering to the "new" cap logo, he was making fun of patsox because he made that logo.oh alright, and yes i was referring to the new update... "That ball has a hit in it, so I want it to get back in the ball bag and goof around with the other balls in there. Maybe it'll learn some sense and come out as a pop-up next time," Mark "The Bird" Fidrych Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted May 4, 2009 Author Share Posted May 4, 2009 Alright, after a week off from concepts, I'll get back into these this week. So just a review the teams I'm redoing includeRaysRed SoxIndiansDodgersBravesPadres maybe?Logos for Cards, and MetsI also want to include this type of jerseyMaybe Indians? That's what I'm thinking.So comments on any of them above to consider on my redos? @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted May 4, 2009 Share Posted May 4, 2009 Something tells me a headfirst slide with a zipper-fronted jersey would really suck. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted May 4, 2009 Share Posted May 4, 2009 Done (30/30)Arizona Diamondbacks: Logos, JerseysAtlanta Braves: Logos, JerseysBaltimore Orioles: Logos, JerseysBoston Red Sox: Logos, JerseysChicago White Sox: Logos, JerseysChicago Cubs: Logos, JerseysCincinnati Reds: Logos, JerseysCleveland Indians: Logos, JerseysColorado Rockies: Logos, JerseysDetroit Tigers: Logos, JerseysHouston Astros: Logos, JerseysKansas City Royals: Logos, JerseysLos Angeles Angels: Logos, JerseysLos Angeles Dodgers: Logos, JerseysMiami Marlins: Logos, JerseysMilwaukee Brewers: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialMinnesota Twins: Logos, JerseysNew York Mets: Logos, JerseysNew York Yankees: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialPhiladelphia Phillies: Logos, JerseysOakland A's: Logos, JerseysPittsburgh Pirates: Logos, JerseysSan Diego Padres: Logos, JerseysSan Francisco Giants: Logos, JerseysSeattle Mariners: Logos, JerseysSt. Louis Cardinals: Logos, JerseysTampa Bay Rays: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialTexas Rangers: Logos, JerseysToronto Blue Jays: Logos, JerseysWashington Nationals: Logos, JerseysYou are missing the Pirates. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted May 4, 2009 Author Share Posted May 4, 2009 Done (30/30)Arizona Diamondbacks: Logos, JerseysAtlanta Braves: Logos, JerseysBaltimore Orioles: Logos, JerseysBoston Red Sox: Logos, JerseysChicago White Sox: Logos, JerseysChicago Cubs: Logos, JerseysCincinnati Reds: Logos, JerseysCleveland Indians: Logos, JerseysColorado Rockies: Logos, JerseysDetroit Tigers: Logos, JerseysHouston Astros: Logos, JerseysKansas City Royals: Logos, JerseysLos Angeles Angels: Logos, JerseysLos Angeles Dodgers: Logos, JerseysMiami Marlins: Logos, JerseysMilwaukee Brewers: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialMinnesota Twins: Logos, JerseysNew York Mets: Logos, JerseysNew York Yankees: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialPhiladelphia Phillies: Logos, JerseysOakland A's: Logos, JerseysPittsburgh Pirates: Logos, JerseysSan Diego Padres: Logos, JerseysSan Francisco Giants: Logos, JerseysSeattle Mariners: Logos, JerseysSt. Louis Cardinals: Logos, JerseysTampa Bay Rays: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialTexas Rangers: Logos, JerseysToronto Blue Jays: Logos, JerseysWashington Nationals: Logos, JerseysYou are missing the Pirates.Check again champ. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted May 4, 2009 Share Posted May 4, 2009 Something tells me a headfirst slide with a zipper-fronted jersey would really suck.Something tells me you're wrong - teams used them for decades without any of the issues you're hinting at. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted May 5, 2009 Share Posted May 5, 2009 Done (30/30)Arizona Diamondbacks: Logos, JerseysAtlanta Braves: Logos, JerseysBaltimore Orioles: Logos, JerseysBoston Red Sox: Logos, JerseysChicago White Sox: Logos, JerseysChicago Cubs: Logos, JerseysCincinnati Reds: Logos, JerseysCleveland Indians: Logos, JerseysColorado Rockies: Logos, JerseysDetroit Tigers: Logos, JerseysHouston Astros: Logos, JerseysKansas City Royals: Logos, JerseysLos Angeles Angels: Logos, JerseysLos Angeles Dodgers: Logos, JerseysMiami Marlins: Logos, JerseysMilwaukee Brewers: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialMinnesota Twins: Logos, JerseysNew York Mets: Logos, JerseysNew York Yankees: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialPhiladelphia Phillies: Logos, JerseysOakland A's: Logos, JerseysPittsburgh Pirates: Logos, JerseysSan Diego Padres: Logos, JerseysSan Francisco Giants: Logos, JerseysSeattle Mariners: Logos, JerseysSt. Louis Cardinals: Logos, JerseysTampa Bay Rays: Logos, Jerseys, SpecialTexas Rangers: Logos, JerseysToronto Blue Jays: Logos, JerseysWashington Nationals: Logos, JerseysYou are missing the Pirates.Check again champ.you sneaky bastard GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted May 8, 2009 Author Share Posted May 8, 2009 Redos!So to start off the redos, I updated my Cleveland package. I went all out with this one, I sketched up the new logos, and made new scripts. I based them off my last set(Feather I logos). I sent the feather to the middle like how elliot said I should. I made a similar Cleveland script to my Indians one. I brought back Chief Wahoo to please most people who commented. The only thing I change on him, was adding a silver outline to match the rest of the set.On the jerseys, I made them like the zip up jerseys above. I actually really like how they turned out, especially the alt.So comments on the Tribe.I'm half way done with Boston, and need a primary for the Rays.Stay tuned. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 The wordmarks seem to get too small in the middle of them, maybe try less arching on the bottom of them (this seems to be more on the away workmark). This could be a problem if you want the feather to be a focal point for the home wordmark. Also, the "ND" side of Cleveland seems to be off balanced compared to the "CL" side. If you want them to look like the zip-ups, thicken the piping a little more and remove the sleeve patch. The sleeve patch would only make the sleeves more clumped (for lack of a better word). Finally, I would say to use the chief on the home and away hats and the C-feather on the alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HotCoffey Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 like ckraider22 said, the hats should be switched and the road script needs some work. one thing I noticed, is that primary logos should have some wording on them, something different than a simple cap logo. this current primary is too plain and you should think about adding "Cleveland" or "Indians" around it somehow. and also, look at the feather on Chief's head. are the blue detail lines that represent indents in the feather supposed to be asymmetrical? they do not match up. maybe thats done purposely, but you might wanna check it out... "That ball has a hit in it, so I want it to get back in the ball bag and goof around with the other balls in there. Maybe it'll learn some sense and come out as a pop-up next time," Mark "The Bird" Fidrych Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 Something tells me a headfirst slide with a zipper-fronted jersey would really suck.Something tells me you're wrong - teams used them for decades without any of the issues you're hinting at.The headfirst slide was pioneered by Rickey Henderson in the 1980's. Before then, it was used exceedingly rarely, because it was considered foolish and risky to risk breaking your fingers on the base or your face on the shortstop's cleats. I'm fairly sure, but not certain, that the Oakland A's were into pullover uniforms by the time Henderson came around. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted May 12, 2009 Author Share Posted May 12, 2009 I'll get back to Cleveland in a few days.Kay now, because of last season, this next team has become my most hated team EVAR!So this year, the BoSox changed some of their logos. I brought back the design from last year. I originally planned to be original, and have the spoked Boston instead of the block one, but they apparently have that logo made already. So I kept the logos the same, since one of my ideas didn't work out...But I posted it anyway, so...I made the Boston script blue, like the away script currently.Remember, this is an update to my green logo set .Jerseys... Kept them the same basically. Added sleeve piping, red outline to the away lettering, and got rid of the blue jersey.No real ideas for other redos now, I'll get back to doing these once I do. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saintsfan Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 Good job with the Red Sox updates there. Certainly they are a team where tradition is important. I wonder if a blue alternate with the retro red sock logo would work?I am still not convinced by the feather/i in the Indians set, but it works a bit better in the middle of the Indians wordmark rather than at the end. Not sure I like the curving of the wordmarks on the Indians set, but its a neat idea that could be used somewhere I am sure. And I am not sure how succesful the CI cap logo is either? But I do like the persistence and the originality in the Indians set. And the retro feel alternate works well. 2011/12 WFL Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 Something tells me a headfirst slide with a zipper-fronted jersey would really suck.Something tells me you're wrong - teams used them for decades without any of the issues you're hinting at.The headfirst slide was pioneered by Rickey Henderson in the 1980's. Before then, it was used exceedingly rarely, because it was considered foolish and risky to risk breaking your fingers on the base or your face on the shortstop's cleats. I'm fairly sure, but not certain, that the Oakland A's were into pullover uniforms by the time Henderson came around.Actually, Pete Rose was famous for his headfirst slides long before Ricky came on to the scene. Admittedly he didn't wear a zipper jersey in Cincy, but he did for his five seasons in Philly.And they're actually the team of which I was thinking - the Phillies wore zippers until 1988, and I'm not aware of their players suffering an abnormal amout of injuries caused by their jerseys. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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