troy_3223 Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 The other big relocation news after Phoenix to Hamilton is the Islanders to KC. (far less likely, but I just realized how close I am to 100 posts. After all these years.)here are the logos - and the jerseysThe template is too good to be lost once Buffalo goes to the throwback thirds full-time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 It is a good template but TBH I think you went the wrong way with it. Curvy and straight stripes just don't work well together in this instance. I prefer the old colors. The whole way you did the different color switches looks random, and the back of the white jersey has two different side panel colors. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troy_3223 Posted May 16, 2009 Author Share Posted May 16, 2009 It is a good template but TBH I think you went the wrong way with it. Curvy and straight stripes just don't work well together in this instance. I prefer the old colors. The whole way you did the different color switches looks random, and the back of the white jersey has two different side panel colors.Yeah, I think you're probably right. I liked it a whole lot right when it was finished, but it does seem a little random and the stripes don't really work. I think I'll rework it a bit and see what comes out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troy_3223 Posted May 17, 2009 Author Share Posted May 17, 2009 It is a good template but TBH I think you went the wrong way with it. Curvy and straight stripes just don't work well together in this instance. I prefer the old colors. The whole way you did the different color switches looks random, and the back of the white jersey has two different side panel colors.Yeah, I think you're probably right. I liked it a whole lot right when it was finished, but it does seem a little random and the stripes don't really work. I think I'll rework it a bit and see what comes out.Okay, so I changed the colors back, replacing the light blue with goldAnd to fix the jerseys, I ditched the stripes, and went with a feather design similar to the Hank Aaron-era Braves. It's better than the first try. The colors do work a lot better. The striping is an improvement, but there's something about them that needs tweaking. I just don't know exactly what. Any thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeimakarenkov44 Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 The sweaters still look a bit funky with that striping pattern. To me at least. It looks more like a KHL sweater to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 The jerseys are still very busy, tone it down a bit and this could be a good concept. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamikel Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 The colors are better, but I'm not feeling the template. I do like the Braves-esque feather element you've incorporated, but not the positioning. There's a reason no teams put any major design elements at the end of the sleeves. They would end up obscured by the gloves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 What everyone else has said, the template it too crowded. Too much going on. Otherwise, great job. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 The gold looks much better than the light blue--so good switch.I think the red could be toned down a bit though.I'm not too into the stripes & such--too much of the new RBK look--and I'm still not used to it.But it's a good starting point. You should post more often. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troy_3223 Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 The gold looks much better than the light blue--so good switch.I think the red could be toned down a bit though.I'm not too into the stripes & such--too much of the new RBK look--and I'm still not used to it.But it's a good starting point. You should post more often.I would post more often, but I don't have a lot of free time on my hands. And the hobbies I do have are all time-consuming. I've come to embrace the new RBK look, mostly. There are some elements (like the butt logo) that have taken a long time to accept. Others (piping that doesn't connect to anything) I'm still working on accepting. I'm going to give this concept one more try before I disappear back into the ether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 For the first version, two words; Buffalo.Bills.For the second set, one acronym; NASCAR.No offense but the uniform design is atrocious. Scrap it and start over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troy_3223 Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 Okay, the changes I made were minor (removing a color panel and tweaking the feathers a bit) but it seems to me to be a major improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 I would post more often, but I don't have a lot of free time on my hands. And the hobbies I do have are all time-consuming. I've come to embrace the new RBK look, mostly. There are some elements (like the butt logo) that have taken a long time to accept. Others (piping that doesn't connect to anything) I'm still working on accepting. I'm going to give this concept one more try before I disappear back into the ether.I used to be on here a lot, but not so much over the last couple of years--for a variety of reasons--including hobbies, but also work, other responsibilities, and health.But I do like to come back here & browse every now & then.I think that last one would look better if that red line (piping) didn't extend down as far on the front--if it was about the same on the front & back I think that would look better. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maz Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 I think it needs a different color scheme. I know those are the traditional colors of the Scouts, but every time I see blue, red, and yellow, i automatically think either A. Circus, or B. Wonder Bread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatorade09 Posted May 19, 2009 Share Posted May 19, 2009 Okay, the changes I made were minor (removing a color panel and tweaking the feathers a bit) but it seems to me to be a major improvement.I don't like the feathers at the tips of the arms and also wouldn't they be hard do see from the glove being in the way. Maybe try putting the feathers vertically up they side of the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted May 19, 2009 Share Posted May 19, 2009 The sweaters have too much going on. They have a very European hockey feel to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted May 19, 2009 Share Posted May 19, 2009 I really dislike how the logo and numbers on the backs of the jerseys are different colour. If you're going to have a red logo with white and yellow outlines on a uniform, why put white numbers with blue and yellow outlines on the back? Same with the blue logo with white and red outlines on a jersey that has red numbers with yellow and blue outlines. It just doesn't work at all.These jerseys kinda make me feel like you took a Wonder Bread bag, used it as a palette and randomly filled in a very busy jersey. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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