Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 The 3rd is supposed ot be a fauxback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I think the simplicity of the logo clashes with the modern template for the jersey. Resize the logo as well. Not bad though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 I think the simplicity of the logo clashes with the modern template for the jersey. Resize the logo as well. Not bad though Should I get rid of the arm sploches Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I have to agree that the logo is too big.The arm "Splotches"? How would that look on a player?I have an idea, and I'm not sure it would work.But nice use of the jets on the alt. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 I have to agree that the logo is too big.The arm "Splotches"? How would that look on a player?I have an idea, and I'm not sure it would work.But nice use of the jets on the alt.Thanks, that was my first idea, they are the Jets, so they should have jets on there jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Congrats, you can fill in a template. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I have to agree that the logo is too big.The arm "Splotches"? How would that look on a player? POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 Congrats, you can fill in a template. Congrats, you can make constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Well, you sure can't, since all you ever post about others' concepts are images. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 Well, you sure can't, since all you ever post about others' concepts are images.If it is needed, I will use words to post what is needed to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Aside from this argument, these kinds of concepts are what's killing the Concepts forum. I don't mean to be harsh, but it's true. You filled in the old Buffaslug template in the Jets' colors, slapped down a crest and put a boring single-color NOB and number on the back and called it a day. You didn't even put sleeve numbers on any of the sweaters. The only thing that shows an ounce of originality is the alternate, but that's ruined by no shoulder logos and the same plain, rushed number and NOB. Take some time and use your imagination. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Aside from this argument, these kinds of concepts are what's killing the Concepts forum. I don't mean to be harsh, but it's true. You filled in the old Buffaslug template in the Jets' colors, slapped down a crest and put a boring single-color NOB and number on the back and called it a day. You didn't even put sleeve numbers on any of the sweaters. The only thing that shows an ounce of originality is the alternate, but that's ruined by no shoulder logos and the same plain, rushed number and NOB. Take some time and use your imagination.Agreed, concepts can go a long way when you come up with the idea yourself. Much more fun as well. Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 The 3rd is supposed ot be a fauxback.Needs more gradients. On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 I have to agree that the logo is too big.The arm "Splotches"? How would that look on a player?Kind of what I was thinking, but not really my cup of tea...but yeah, go for it, if you like it.It's piping that's my big beef... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 The 3rd is supposed ot be a fauxback.Needs more gradients.You find a way to shoehorn it in, and still make it look Super Sexy like it is now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Lights Out, Nash: Please quit trolling this thread. Thank you. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio  POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GO2HELL Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 IMO I think it looks sharp. This template looks boss but only if the right colours are applied correctly, (I'm looking you at gatineau olymiques) and it looks GREAT with the jets colours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 Gee, I wonder what a black alternate would look like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 So everybody knows, the Grey shoulder stripes are supposed to represent Jet Streaks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 But seriously, I like it. I hate the Buffaslug template but it works for the Jets in a semi-decent way. I think the gray arm stripes could resemble wisps of smoke coming from the Jet. Looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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