jaker52 Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 I was bored so I drew this up real quick MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Okay... but a little bland with the three stars and all.EDIT: SORRY! I just googled the flag, and realized that you did a great job turning it into a crest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 There's lots of tension between that red and blue, such that the text is almost unreadable. Also, if you're going to go all out with the Tennesse-flag thing, consider that the stars in the flag are actually at a funky angle, not in a nice little triangle with a horizontal base. The Titans, of course, don't abide by the flag's conventions, but it's something to consider. The Titans also have a lot more going with their branding, which helps them get away with it.And there's another point. Take away the text, and there's nothing about this that says "sports logo", let alone "soccer logo". Keep experimenting. Push yourself. Consider this a rough draft, not a finished product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 The text should definitely be white. And the arc on which it sits needs to be flattened out a bit as the text isn't following the same arc as the other circles. But a good concept so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 The actual Tri-Star is asymetric. Try to do that and it will look less like just 3 stars and more like the iconic Tennessee Tri-Star.also I think in your poll you mean jerseys, not concept. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 25, 2014 Author Share Posted May 25, 2014 Yeah I do And the people have spoken I will update this till it looks good then begin a series. It will be my summer project. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thebutkiker Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Just letting you know I'm working on a series for all the states if that's what you're thinking of doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Stunning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Just letting you know I'm working on a series for all the states if that's what you're thinking of doing.Me, too. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 new version MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 An improvement. But the TN thing isn't really working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 The outline needs to be thicker, and I'd separate the "TN" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 A little better, i don't like the font though, wasted space. Also the outline needs to be thicker but i'd say its a little better. I prefer the roundel better though. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 quick fix thanks for the help MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 A couple of things:First, you don't really word "Tennessee" because the star/circle already "says" Tennessee.Second, I just now noticed that you don't know yet what sport you're designing this logo for. You've *got* to start with the sport first. Different sports require different logos. Part of it is how they're used for the uniform--what works for a football helmet might not work for a hockey jersey. And part of it is that different sports have different traditions. Soccer uses crests. Baseball tends to use monograms and initials for ballcaps. On and on. Decide your sport before you even begin a logo. This choice will automatically give you some direction for your design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 A couple of things:First, you don't really word "Tennessee" because the star/circle already "says" Tennessee.Second, I just now noticed that you don't know yet what sport you're designing this logo for. You've *got* to start with the sport first. Different sports require different logos. Part of it is how they're used for the uniform--what works for a football helmet might not work for a hockey jersey. And part of it is that different sports have different traditions. Soccer uses crests. Baseball tends to use monograms and initials for ballcaps. On and on. Decide your sport before you even begin a logo. This choice will automatically give you some direction for your design.well I did and then wondered if i should change then the vote told me to stick to soccer MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 A couple of things:First, you don't really word "Tennessee" because the star/circle already "says" Tennessee.Second, I just now noticed that you don't know yet what sport you're designing this logo for. You've *got* to start with the sport first. Different sports require different logos. Part of it is how they're used for the uniform--what works for a football helmet might not work for a hockey jersey. And part of it is that different sports have different traditions. Soccer uses crests. Baseball tends to use monograms and initials for ballcaps. On and on. Decide your sport before you even begin a logo. This choice will automatically give you some direction for your design.I assumed soccer when the thread was initially entitled Tennessee State Crest. I think that gave it away, personally.I'm liking the shield, but I have 2 things wrong with it right now. Like above, the TN and "TENNESSEE" just haven't worked, especially with that font. Also, since you have some empty, red space at the bottom of the shield, I'd like to see something there. Possibly a soccer ball (if this truly is a soccer crest)? Not sure, but I'd like something there, without it being too crowded. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 another minor update MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 The "Soccer club" part needs to be in the middle of the space, not hugging the circle. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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