VitorioArts Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 Hey Guys! This is a fantasy Hockey team we created called the Kansas City Knights. We will put up jerseys up later but here is the logo for now. Hope you like this one!C&C Welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 cool, this has a lot of potential! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 This is almost there. It's just a bit too detailed. Try shrinking the image down to about half its size and see what you lose, then delete most of the things you lose. Then blow it back up again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 cool, this has a lot of potential!And what would you say needs to be fixed? Tired of all these one liners that provide no help.Anywho, I agree with what was said above. Need to simplify more. You would totally lose the details in the face and armor if it was shrunk or put onto a jersey. Also the wordmark seems rather bland. As if it's just an MS font. It's a good start though! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaseballJunkie Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 How about replacing the sword with a hockey stick? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted June 12, 2014 Author Share Posted June 12, 2014 How about replacing the sword with a hockey stick?I had it it that way, just didn't look right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 Also choose a color for the horses head that contrasts with the knights body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 I really like the work on the knight...for me the outside oval doesnt fit. I mean it looks ok but I think a diamond or hexagon type shape would fit better. Tying in to the sharpness of the sword and all. Great work on the horse and the knight. And your choice of colors works well for KC and for a knight at the same time. Good show! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlessollars Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 if you are doing anything KC you have to have the KC in the logo and you have a blank shield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 The perspective on the arm and sword is really off. The arm recedes into the background, but the position of the hand would have the sword held horizontally, not toward the viewer. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 The perspective on the arm and sword is really off. The arm recedes into the background, but the position of the hand would have the sword held horizontally, not toward the viewer.I don't think the perspective of the arm or sword is off at all. Seems like it's being held directly over his head. I really like the direction this is going in. It has just the right amount of detail for what is basically a full figure logo without being to simple of overwhelmingly detailed. The one thing I'd like to see is what the mark would look like without the oval. It would help eliminate a lot of un-needed white space in the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted June 13, 2014 Share Posted June 13, 2014 I really like this. I think the horse gets lost a bit in the field of blue though. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaseballJunkie Posted June 13, 2014 Share Posted June 13, 2014 The perspective on the arm and sword is really off. The arm recedes into the background, but the position of the hand would have the sword held horizontally, not toward the viewer.I don't think the perspective of the arm or sword is off at all. Seems like it's being held directly over his head. I really like the direction this is going in. It has just the right amount of detail for what is basically a full figure logo without being to simple of overwhelmingly detailed. The one thing I'd like to see is what the mark would look like without the oval. It would help eliminate a lot of un-needed white space in the logo.Totally agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 13, 2014 Share Posted June 13, 2014 I think the sword needs to be parallel to the head, not the shield. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayLars9867 Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 Decent. Like the colors! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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