VitorioArts Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 Hey Guys! It's been a long time since I've posting something, so I hope you like this one.C&C More than welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thecargeek Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 It's a good start, first decrease the size of the teeth, they look too sharp and long, they need to be thicker and shorter, also not as sharp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marble21 Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 The teeth comment above seems pretty fair.I also think the eyes are too close together compared to an actual bulldog. It might help the logo look "meaner" too if they were further apart a little. UBI FIDES IBI LUX ET ROBUR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 Also you have some sharp lines & some rounded lines I would make them more consistent My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted February 5, 2015 Author Share Posted February 5, 2015 Thanks for the comments! the reason why I am working on a Bulldog is because its for the Adrian College Bulldogs! So here is the logo now and my logo compared. I also threw in a collar. its gold because their colors are Black and Gold. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 The jowls need to look more like the original. THe way it is on yours is just like a drape. look for some head on bulldog photos and go from there. Don't forget the different breeds so you can ID which you prefer/ they want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 its definitely better than the original but I agree with the above commenters. try to fix it up al little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
__taylorc Posted February 6, 2015 Share Posted February 6, 2015 No way I have a few friends playing football up at Adrian. Its nice to see that a concept is up on the boards about the school. Anyways what youve done here is a pretty good update, i do agree though that the teeth are too big but nothing really else to complain about good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTKing Posted February 6, 2015 Share Posted February 6, 2015 Its looking pretty good now, the teeth look a lot better and collar is a nice touch. Huge improvement over the old one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thecargeek Posted February 6, 2015 Share Posted February 6, 2015 Ya it does look much better, and I do love the addition of the collar, but there is something about it that doesn't seem right I till now I can't figure it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted February 6, 2015 Share Posted February 6, 2015 To me he looks very sad. I would suggest you make it seem more ferocious. I'm not sure exactly what makes him look so sad, though. It has to be in the eyes, but I can't quite place exactly what it is. The other thing I notice is that the jowls could use some work. I don't want to sound too harsh, but it almost looks like his face is melting. (The jowls could also add to his sad-look.) Sorry I can't give much feedback about how to fix these issues, but others who are much better at logo creation should be able to help you out.Edit: After looking at another bulldog logo, try working the jowls into the rest of the face better. Maybe have them start behind the snout and curve down from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted February 7, 2015 Share Posted February 7, 2015 I would remove those parts that look like eyebrows to me (circled). They are giving the dog that sad look. You could add some skin folds to the forehead area, like in the old logo, in order to make the bulldog look more massive and realistic. “Never argue with an idiot! They will only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.” ––George Carlin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 7, 2015 Share Posted February 7, 2015 Oh, Brother... Bulldogs. I was just tasked with a similar job, and with help from the board took it from meh, to pretty danged cool. Try all their comments, and some will work, others wont. But you may get enough nuggets to make the bulldog really solid. Now my thoughts, having just gone thru this.Brows - You need wrinkles, even one will change the look.Chin/Jaw - Id invert the mandible make the top wider and more flat, and the bottom more rounded Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted February 11, 2015 Author Share Posted February 11, 2015 Hey guys, sorry for the wait! Here you go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 11, 2015 Share Posted February 11, 2015 better, angrier. how about increasing the nose size, just a little not too much. Also the teeth look like they could be a moon shape if you pull it out, try straightening it out a little more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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