jaker52 Posted February 19, 2015 Author Share Posted February 19, 2015 With no school and the world down south being under 3 inches of ice, I got another team done! Expect more progress since tomorrow got cancelled too. Just a little presentation advice. Keep your elements in the same positions and same sizes across kits. It's particularly bad in this Spurs example, where the sponsor, numbers and badge all vary wildly in size and position. The Save As function is your friend here. Work from the same file and save as to ensure all elements remain in proportion across kits.This jumped out at me big time on the kits for Spurs. The ideas are pretty good. I'm not too fond of the home shirt with the navy shoulders, but it's not bad. On the third kit, I think a white Spurs logo on the shirt and shorts would be better. And speaking of shorts, what's going on with the waistband on all of the kits? Why is it different from one side to the other?Also I think more attention needs to be given to the small quirks of each league. For instance, the Premier League uses its crest on both sleeves, has a league-specific font with the league logo embedded in the numerals and allows use of only certain colors for the numbers (white, black, navy, gold and red...I think that's it).Lastly, work on making some of the elements flow better with the pieces of clothing. Specifically, the crests and numerals on the shorts should be angled to run parallel with the edge of the shorts. If the legs of the shorts were illustrated straight up and down, then those elements would also appear to be vertical. However, with the legs flared out, the crests and numerals should be rotated to match. Small elements like this help improve your presentation. Also, I agree with several comments asking for the backs of the jerseys and socks.Thanks to all of you for the help. As for the BPL crest, I knew they did it on both sides, but I always thought it was redundant to have it like that. The mls crest is the same way. I just don't like it so I do it my way on my concepts. Should I stick to the original on that? Also, thanks for the tip on the numbers I didn't know there was any requirements on the color of the number. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biscuit faces of them Posted February 19, 2015 Share Posted February 19, 2015 With no school and the world down south being under 3 inches of ice, I got another team done! Expect more progress since tomorrow got cancelled too. Just a little presentation advice. Keep your elements in the same positions and same sizes across kits. It's particularly bad in this Spurs example, where the sponsor, numbers and badge all vary wildly in size and position. The Save As function is your friend here. Work from the same file and save as to ensure all elements remain in proportion across kits.This jumped out at me big time on the kits for Spurs. The ideas are pretty good. I'm not too fond of the home shirt with the navy shoulders, but it's not bad. On the third kit, I think a white Spurs logo on the shirt and shorts would be better. And speaking of shorts, what's going on with the waistband on all of the kits? Why is it different from one side to the other?Also I think more attention needs to be given to the small quirks of each league. For instance, the Premier League uses its crest on both sleeves, has a league-specific font with the league logo embedded in the numerals and allows use of only certain colors for the numbers (white, black, navy, gold and red...I think that's it).Lastly, work on making some of the elements flow better with the pieces of clothing. Specifically, the crests and numerals on the shorts should be angled to run parallel with the edge of the shorts. If the legs of the shorts were illustrated straight up and down, then those elements would also appear to be vertical. However, with the legs flared out, the crests and numerals should be rotated to match. Small elements like this help improve your presentation. Also, I agree with several comments asking for the backs of the jerseys and socks. Thanks to all of you for the help. As for the BPL crest, I knew they did it on both sides, but I always thought it was redundant to have it like that. The mls crest is the same way. I just don't like it so I do it my way on my concepts. Should I stick to the original on that? Also, thanks for the tip on the numbers I didn't know there was any requirements on the color of the number.This is YOUR thread.do whatever you see fit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted February 19, 2015 Share Posted February 19, 2015 I love how well you've improved on your designs since you joined. Man City is great except for the adidas stripes on the Clash kit, but I'm glad it's Red and Black. I'm not too excited about the Third Kit. I'd prefer to see either a Dark Blue with hints of Sky Blue or a full white kit with touches of sky blue and a dark blue etihad logo. Just some thoughts. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 19, 2015 Author Share Posted February 19, 2015 I love how well you've improved on your designs since you joined. Man City is great except for the adidas stripes on the Clash kit, but I'm glad it's Red and Black. I'm not too excited about the Third Kit. I'd prefer to see either a Dark Blue with hints of Sky Blue or a full white kit with touches of sky blue and a dark blue etihad logo. Just some thoughts.They were not meant to be adidas stripes but I see what everyone is saying. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 19, 2015 Share Posted February 19, 2015 With no school and the world down south being under 3 inches of ice, I got another team done! Expect more progress since tomorrow got cancelled too. Just a little presentation advice. Keep your elements in the same positions and same sizes across kits. It's particularly bad in this Spurs example, where the sponsor, numbers and badge all vary wildly in size and position. The Save As function is your friend here. Work from the same file and save as to ensure all elements remain in proportion across kits.This jumped out at me big time on the kits for Spurs. The ideas are pretty good. I'm not too fond of the home shirt with the navy shoulders, but it's not bad. On the third kit, I think a white Spurs logo on the shirt and shorts would be better. And speaking of shorts, what's going on with the waistband on all of the kits? Why is it different from one side to the other?Also I think more attention needs to be given to the small quirks of each league. For instance, the Premier League uses its crest on both sleeves, has a league-specific font with the league logo embedded in the numerals and allows use of only certain colors for the numbers (white, black, navy, gold and red...I think that's it).Lastly, work on making some of the elements flow better with the pieces of clothing. Specifically, the crests and numerals on the shorts should be angled to run parallel with the edge of the shorts. If the legs of the shorts were illustrated straight up and down, then those elements would also appear to be vertical. However, with the legs flared out, the crests and numerals should be rotated to match. Small elements like this help improve your presentation. Also, I agree with several comments asking for the backs of the jerseys and socks.Thanks to all of you for the help. As for the BPL crest, I knew they did it on both sides, but I always thought it was redundant to have it like that. The mls crest is the same way. I just don't like it so I do it my way on my concepts. Should I stick to the original on that? Also, thanks for the tip on the numbers I didn't know there was any requirements on the color of the number.It's definitely your call on the dual crests. I was pointing it out just for the sake of mentioning it...not knowing that you left off 1 intentionally. It doesn't look bad by any means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 22, 2015 Author Share Posted February 22, 2015 sorry for lack of progress, I was away from the laptop this weekend. We are out of school again tomorrow though so I may get something done then. Here is NYCFC. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biscuit faces of them Posted February 22, 2015 Share Posted February 22, 2015 Looks Williams F1 ish.I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Love this thread. It would be cool to see a third kit for NYCFC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crustin Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 NYCFC looks great I like that you distanced them from Man City more than there current set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 I gotta say, you've improved a LOT since your first concepts on here! And that's a good thing! Nothing specific here, but all the designs in this thread have been great all around! Your template is very nice, too!Can't wait to see more! BEHANCE | PORTFOLIOÂ Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 23, 2015 Author Share Posted February 23, 2015 Here is a simple San Jose (they have no jersey sponsor.) MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biscuit faces of them Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Just Awesome. The Alt design is a little too red but I do Respect it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 San Jose looks great. Love the stripe motif from the logo. It really bothers me that they don't have a sponser, while everyone else does. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 23, 2015 Author Share Posted February 23, 2015 San Jose looks great. Love the stripe motif from the logo. It really bothers me that they don't have a sponser, while everyone else does.It does to me too, but that is how it is and it feels weird giving them one. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dbroalexander Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 If San Jose has no sponsor why not show off the team name or shield on the front of the jersey? Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 23, 2015 Author Share Posted February 23, 2015 San Jose looks great. Love the stripe motif from the logo. It really bothers me that they don't have a sponser, while everyone else does.It does to me too, but that is how it is and it feels weird just giving them one. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biscuit faces of them Posted February 24, 2015 Share Posted February 24, 2015 SAP might be a good idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted February 24, 2015 Share Posted February 24, 2015 SAP might be a good ideaI second this. And you could potentially incorporate the angle of the SAP logo into the design, too! BEHANCE | PORTFOLIOÂ Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 25, 2015 Author Share Posted February 25, 2015 I left out a third for the crew because I think the look is complete with two kits. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 I'd swap the MLS logos, other than that, it's good. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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