GMS1122 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 this is a concept for my PFA expansion team canidate, the San Diego Swordfish. Nitroseed and myself worked together on this logo, some places you may be able to tell who did what, but thats just because nitro is a god.I came up with the original idea, and nitro just made everything "pop" and hes awesome, cant thank him enough. so without further ado....looking forward to hearing your comments/critiques GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 another awesome creation from nitroseed, cant wait to see some uniforms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 another awesome creation from nitroseed, cant wait to see some uniforms yep he sure is the man GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grish Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Amazing creation. Nothing more that can be said. "Try not to have a good time ... This is supposed to be educational."- Charles Schulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Looks really great, guys. Two things, though. One, maybe it's just me but is the top part of a swordfish(I dunno what you call it, it's not a fin. The huge thing running along the top of his back) really that tall? It's as tall as the fish itself, if not more in some places in the logo. But I don't know anything about fish. Secondly, maybe I'm just slow, but what's going on in the SD secondary? I can't tell what all that color is supposed to be. A wave? Finally, the wordmark looks good. What font did you use? I'm always looking for good fonts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pagan696 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 very nice!!what's in the SD (2nd) logo? Carolina Dreamin' ΓΔΒ ΓΔΒ ΓΔΒ When a robotic Nixon is on the loose, we have a duty to take action. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 Looks really great, guys. Two things, though. One, maybe it's just me but is the top part of a swordfish(I dunno what you call it, it's not a fin. The huge thing running along the top of his back) really that tall? It's as tall as the fish itself, if not more in some places in the logo. But I don't know anything about fish. Secondly, maybe I'm just slow, but what's going on in the SD secondary? I can't tell what all that color is supposed to be. A wave? Finally, the wordmark looks good. What font did you use? I'm always looking for good fonts. yeah, the fin's actually that big, we did our research ... Thats supposed to be a wave in the SD, thats easily the shakiest part of the concept and will likely be changed. Also the font is Archery Rounded. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Nitro has cornered the fish market. Nice job, guys. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 heres a new secondary i came up with, i leke it better than the wave one for sure...what do you think? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 that looks great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 yea i could sort of tell that the secondary was a wave, but i love that new one a lot more. another awesome concept, im speechless basically. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 very nice! Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I absolutely love this logo, great work guys! I think the secondary would be more like a wave if the yellow was taken out. I really do like the second Secondary more however. Looks fantastic. Graet work once again. These collaborations are a great thing to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tajmccall Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 heres a new secondary i came up with, i leke it better than the wave one for sure...what do you think? Looks like a combo of the Marlins and Chargers.I liked the first ones idea better, id just have that fin silouhette coming from the bottom left of the D, and across. I think that dorsal is a strong mark, and would look cool against the Monogram. Store 1 Store 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoFan Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 heres a new secondary i came up with, i leke it better than the wave one for sure...what do you think? Looks like a combo of the Marlins and Chargers. Yep, right down to the stripe in the lower-half of the SD. But the logo & concept are very strong & have lots of great possiblities. I know the final product will look great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Wow!!!! Simply amazing! The primary logo looks great with all the detail and the shadowing. I like the second secondary better than the first, although I would like to see the wave without the yellow, it might look better... Four times IHL Nielson Cup Champions - Montréal Shamrocks (2008-2009 // 2009-2010 // 2012-2013 // 2014-2015) Five times TNFF Confederation Cup Champions - Yellowknife Eagles (2009 CC VI // 2010 CC VII // 2015 CC XII // 2017 CC XIV // 2018 CC XV) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nesi427 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 WOW! Great concept, applause all around to ALL those involved...It's always a pleasure to see what you guys post when it's original work. FANTASY SPORTS:Â UBA (NBA): New York Scrapers | CL (MLB): St Pete Beach Clippers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizznick Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Put the swordfish inside the SD, like you did with the wave. Looks great overall. realclearpolitics.com "Political tags - such as royalist, communist, democrat, populist, fascist, liberal, conservative, and so forth - are never basic criteria. The human race divides politically into those who want people to be controlled and those who have no such desire." - Robert A. Heinlein Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 GMS these are some great logos you have here, a great collaboration with nitroseed made this logo best it could be. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ez Street Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Fantastic job collaborating guys! I like to see our desingers teamin up and producing a kick-ass concept.What's next GMac and myself teaming up.....wait...HELL NO, that guy is horrible. @DavidStreeter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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