gojetsgo Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 OK, it has been ages since I came up with a concept, but I decided to revisit my favourite logo to play with. Featured in the logo is the ill-fated but technologically marvelous Avro Arrow - a Canadian built aircraft.C&C PLEASE! This logo will become my floor hockey team's logo, so I'd like to improve it if possible. Comments & Criticism, please!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesCraven Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 The Jets should have had that logo a long time ago. BTW, what's all the rumo(u)rs about a move to, uh, Phoenix anyway? "I better go take a long walk off a short pier or something."Some people on this bolard have told me to do just that.My "Ron Mexico" alias is "Jon Tobago". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEAD! Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 The Jets should have had that logo a long time ago. BTW, what's all the rumo(u)rs about a move to, uh, Phoenix anyway? Not THIS again I saw, I came, I left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 The Jets should have had that logo a long time ago. BTW, what's all the rumo(u)rs about a move to, uh, Phoenix anyway? I hear they're going to be called the Coyotes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee. Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 The Jets should have had that logo a long time ago. BTW, what's all the rumo(u)rs about a move to, uh, Phoenix anyway? You know he's sunk to unheard-of lows when he steals my weakest material. Welcome to DrunjFlix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gojetsgo Posted December 2, 2004 Author Share Posted December 2, 2004 So what do you think of the LOGO? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 I like the idea behind it, but both elements need to be integrated better. Right now, the plane is kind of slapped on top of the lettering, but then it has an unrealistic perspective with the top of the tail coming out behind the E.It's also a little weird with the plane coming straight at you, but the text is slanted...two different paths of motion, I guess. If the plane were smaller, and just a silhouette, the competing prespectives wouldn't be noeticeable, but since the plane is overwhelming, their more obvious.The plane blends into the bottom red area of the logo. It needs to stand out more, so it's shape is more recognizable. Either add some extra white outlines around the red, or make the whole circle blue. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDonovan Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 Tilt the jet to the same angle as the "J" in the word jets. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 Nothing beats this lame idea: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spyboy1 Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 My only suggestion would to be to outline the red edge of the plane with white or blue (or both perhaps) where it is against the red background. The top half of the plane separates nicely from the white letters and the blue background, but I feel it gets a little lost against the red. Kind of like it's coming out of a fog.Otherwise it's nice.JeffB Click here to read Third String Goalie - The Hockey Jersey of the Day Blog Click here to see my hockey and baseball jersey collection online ?You don?t like to see 20 kids punching 20 other kids. But it?s not a disgrace, It?s hockey.? - Michael Farber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCap Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 gojetsgo, i love it! PotD 26/2/12 1/7/15 2020 BASS Spin the Wheel, Make the Deal Regular Season Champion 2021 BASS NFL Pick'em Regular Season Champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFoA Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 Nothing beats this lame idea: That's f'n a. For real.But anyways, GoJetsGo, thats a pretty nice logo. I'd straighten the word Jets out a little, but that's just me. Good job   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gojetsgo Posted December 3, 2004 Author Share Posted December 3, 2004 Thanks for the comments guys. I'm retooling it a tiny bit, but there isnt a whole lot I want to change. I purposely had the bottom of the circle be red, so that the plane was a little obscured and a little more abstract - not just an obvious plane like the Houston Aeros logo. I'll change the bottom of the plane a bit though.As far as the tilt in the word Jets...hmmm. Thats a tough one because the tilt is so emblematic of the original Jets logos. I might add a maple leaf where the small red jet used to be... kind of like a reason for the tilt. I'll throw something down soon.By the way, for reference, here's the very first Jets logo I posted:I think my new one is alot cleaner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gojetsgo Posted December 3, 2004 Author Share Posted December 3, 2004 OK, I fiddled around. Most of the changes I just didnt like though. I am keeping the red at the bottom. I like how the plane is obscured. I made the plane's fin come over the "E" to get away from the confusing perspective. Now you can't read JETS as well, but I think it's a good trade-off. I also haphazardly threw in a maple leaf. What do you guys think. Lose the leaf? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 Is it an illusion, or is teh nose of the jet curved to the left? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gojetsgo Posted December 3, 2004 Author Share Posted December 3, 2004 its an illusion, or at least it wasnt intended. I didnt really notice that before, but I do now. Weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suigi Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 I really like the logo.Good job! Super Wario Comix!Iron Crossover IX Contender (Tied for 6th)Iron Crossover Halloween Contender (Tied for Bronze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spyboy1 Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 I like the leaf. What I would try is to rotate it so it is straight up and down and then have half or it (or less) tucked in behind the "J". That could be cool. Otherwise, what you currently have is fine too.JeffB Click here to read Third String Goalie - The Hockey Jersey of the Day Blog Click here to see my hockey and baseball jersey collection online ?You don?t like to see 20 kids punching 20 other kids. But it?s not a disgrace, It?s hockey.? - Michael Farber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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