andrewharrington Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 hey guys. can you take a look at this and give me any critique on what i can to do to make it better? any and all comments are appreciated.EDIT - see below I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 whats he standing on? On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 for the hind leg where you have it straight tan/dark tan for the separation, slide a little green back between them, but not all the way through. Color wise, maybe make the green a little darker, or play around and find some different colors. Also, the mouth needs some work. The bottom row looks sort of out of place, maybe scoot it back left a little bit. But you've got an awesome start, keep at it. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cashcleaner Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 Awwwww...he's cute as the dickens, he is! Not particularly ferocious, but it's a nice looking image.Who's a widdle putty tat?You are!Yes you are! Thanks go to Eddie010 for the Signature and Avatar. Nice work, mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 looks good, the coloring is great but I think the front legs are little bit out of proportion? Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 Awwwww...he's cute as the dickens, he is! Not particularly ferocious, but it's a nice looking image.Who's a widdle putty tat?You are!Yes you are! On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
epper Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 it kinda looks to much like a nicely-groomed house cat. possibly give it a more aggressive stance and "roughen it up" a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 im going to explore the teeth. im also thinking longer legs, so it doesnt look like a cub, more proportional to an adult. i like using green to separate the foreground legs and the background legs more. are cougars really rough? ive always seen them as very smoothly groomed cats because they have such short fur. lions and tigers and jaguars and lynx and bobcats though, look rough to me, as they have longer fur. and hes not standing on anything, because he is a pixelated image, not a real cougar. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDonovan Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 the face needs to be stretched out a bit more...other than that I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Is his head a tad large or am I mistaken?LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 i think you are correct. its a combination of the head being a bit too large and the limbs a bit too small. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sacker12 Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 It looks more like a cougar to me. It has that BYU look to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 hey guys. can you take a look at this and give me any critique on what i can to do to make it better? any and all comments are appreciated.EDIT - see below I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 I agree w/ the CC so far... as for colors and such, but the body pose is somewhat passive... I think a puma should be shown in motion, or attacking ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machpost Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 I agree w/ the CC so far... "The CC" hasn't even commented on this yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 I think he meant critiques/comments. I agree he looks passive. I dunno why, but he looks bald to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Buffalo Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 The smaller head definitely helps, it looked like a Cub before. As far as the front paws looking out of place, that might be a good place to put a wordmark, then it will look like his front legs are on a rock or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 my girlfriend suggested that, when i do the wordmark, thats probably where it will go. by the way, since that last update, i thinned his abdomen up, so he looks more lean than fat. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilaLogos Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 you could change the colors, give him some claws and have a nice Panther update. I really like it, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 25, 2005 Author Share Posted January 25, 2005 its getting closer to final quality. i even added some "roughness" to appease the fans. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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